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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike. When I was a child it was bought from my grandpa.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, and there are mainly 2 reasons. The first one is that it is very convenient and the second one is that it can protect the environment.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答句子时态与细节需更准确,避免时态混用;开头要直接回应并加入一两句支持细节,使用连接词让表达更自然。比如把时态统一为过去时,并说明你对自行车的记忆或用途。可以把回答扩展为不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. My grandfather bought me a small red bike when I was about seven, and I rode it almost every afternoon after school. It was quite simple but sturdy, and learning to ride it gave me a lot of confidence.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更具体并使用连接词自然衔接观点;提供具体例子或对比能增强说服力。避免列数字而不展开,加入简短说明为什么便利和环保,并可举一两个具体场景。保持不超过五句。

Ví dụ: Yes, they are. Firstly, bikes are very convenient for short trips in busy cities because they are easy to park and can avoid traffic jams. Secondly, many people prefer cycling as a low‑cost and eco‑friendly alternative to driving, especially for commuting to work or going to the market.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike.

Yes, I had a bike.

原句使用現在時態“have”,但提問是過去式“Did you have... when you were a child?”應使用過去時態“had”。建議根據提問時態把動詞改為過去式以保持時態一致。

Verb in the past participle form

× When I was a child it was bought from my grandpa.

When I was a child it was bought by my grandpa.

原句中使用被動語態時,表示動作的執行者應用介詞by而不是from。‘bought from my grandpa’表示從爺爺那裡買到(通常主語是我買東西),而被動句要表明動作者時應用‘bought by my grandpa’。建議使用‘by’來標示動作執行者。

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes, of course, and there are mainly 2 reasons.

Yes, of course, and there are mainly two reasons.

原句不是語法錯誤,但數字書寫建議在正式書面英語中用單詞形式'two'代替阿拉伯數字'2'。此外此句時態與上下文匹配,無需改變。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× The first one is that it is very convenient and the second one is that it can protect the environment.

The first reason is that it is very convenient, and the second is that it can protect the environment.

原句中重复使用'one'顯得冗餘,可改為'reason'或省略one以使語句更自然。同時在連接兩個分句時加逗號更符合書面習慣。建議使用更自然的表達:'The first reason... and the second...'。

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