BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I want to log in my account.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I don't want to answer answer this question.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 10.0

Gợi ý: 你没有直接回应考官的问题,回答与题目无关且不符合雅思口语要求。要注意题题技巧:先用一句主题句直接回答,然后用1–2句补充细节或例子,保持自然且不啰嗦。练习时可准备一些关于童年交通工具的常用表达和连接词(例如:Yes, I did. / No, I didn’t. / When I was a child, ... / because ...)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven, and I used to ride it to the park every weekend because my friends lived nearby.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 5.0

Gợi ý: 你拒绝回答导致没有给出任何信息,严重影响评分。即便不想详谈,也应给出简短礼貌的回答并提供简要理由或例子。练习使用简单的结构:先给出观点,然后用一两句话说明原因或举例,并用连接词(for example, because, however)使表达连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise; for example, you can see many cyclists commuting in the city during rush hour.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× I want to log in my account.

I wanted to log in to my account.

问题类型:句子结构错误(时态与不定式/动词形式搭配)以及介词用法。原句在回答“Did you have a bike when you were a child?”(过去时)时使用现在时“I want to log in my account”,与情境时态不一致,同时缺少介词“to”搭配“log in”。正确表达应使用过去时“wanted”以匹配面试官的过去时提问,并在“log in”后加介词“to”。建议:1)注意句子时态与上下文一致(这里为过去时);2)记住固定搭配“log in to (an account)”。具体改正为“I wanted to log in to my account.”(如果想表达当时想登录)。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× I don't want to answer answer this question.

I don't want to answer this question.

问题类型:冠词/冗余词及句子结构错误。原句有重复单词“answer answer”,属于书写/口语重复错误,应删除多余部分;此外短语“answer this question”本身是正确的。建议:1)注意不要重复词语;2)完整句子结构为主语+助动词+动词原形+宾语,即“I don't want to answer this question.”;3)如果是在面试当时应该用过去时,可改为“I didn't want to answer that question.”以匹配过去时情境。

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