Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and direct. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No and brief reason), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., don’t repeat “it's something”). Also correct small grammar issues (use past tense consistently and avoid number '1'). Aim for 2–4 sentences total.

Ví dụ: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my family couldn't afford one. However, I often watched other kids learning to ride, and I envied how their parents patiently taught them. I still hope to learn to ride a bike someday because it looks fun and useful.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and then support it with a specific reason and an example. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' to connect ideas, and avoid vague phrases like 'majority of the people' without context. Keep answers within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Generally, bikes are not very popular in my country because people prefer faster and more comfortable transport. For example, many commuters use cars, trains, or ride-hailing services for daily travel, especially in cities with heavy traffic.

× No, I did not, but I wished I had one because I saw other kids learning how to ride a bike, I saw their parents teaching them how to ride 1 and it's something I genuinely wished I could do, but it's something I still look forward to doing.

✓ No, I did not, but I wished I had one because I saw other kids learning how to ride a bike and their parents teaching them; it was something I genuinely wanted to be able to do, and it's something I still look forward to doing.

The sentence mixes past simple (did not, saw, wished) and present perfect/continuous ideas awkwardly and contains redundancy and a typo ('ride 1'). Use past tense consistently for childhood recollection: 'wished' and 'saw' are correct, but replace 'it's something I genuinely wished I could do' with 'it was something I genuinely wanted to be able to do' to keep past perspective. Use a semicolon or conjunction to join clauses and remove repeated 'I saw'. Also keep present tense 'I still look forward to doing' for a current ongoing desire. Suggestions: remove duplicated clauses, correct the typo, and maintain consistent tense for past events while keeping present tense for current feelings.

× No, bikes are not popular because majority of the people in my country don't see how helpful it can be.

✓ No, bikes are not popular because the majority of people in my country don't see how helpful they can be.

The phrase needs the article 'the' before 'majority' when referring to a specific group: 'the majority of people'. Also 'people' is plural so the pronoun should be 'they' and the modal 'can be' should agree with plural. Suggestions: use 'the majority of people' and match pronouns and verbs to plural nouns.

× They mostly rely on the use of cars, trains or they would rather book a ride to get to their destination.

✓ They mostly rely on cars or trains, or they would rather book a ride to get to their destination.

The phrase 'rely on the use of' is wordy and unnatural; 'rely on cars or trains' is concise and correct. Also include a comma before 'or' to separate options. Ensure parallel structure: 'rely on cars or trains' parallels 'would rather book a ride'. Suggestions: use simpler prepositional phrase 'rely on cars' and keep list items parallel.