Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have bike. I have 2-3 or four bike at my middle school and high school. But uh, I have the, uh, somebody just, uh, stole my bike.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, it is a very popular in China as now people use share bike every day is a very cheap, oh cheap and uh convenient to use, so we like.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 语法与时态需要纠正,表达要更连贯并避免重复填充词。回答要直接切题(如使用过去时),给出简洁的细节并用连接词衔接。例如说明拥有自行车的数量、使用场景和被偷的经历的时间点与结果。注意句子不要过长且不超过5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had several bikes when I was a child. I owned two or three different bikes during middle and high school because I used them to commute to school and visit friends. However, one of my bikes was stolen last year while I left it unlocked outside my apartment, so I haven’t had a bike since then.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 需要更自然、连贯的表达并修正主语和时态错误。用恰当的连接词扩展理由(如便宜、方便、环保),并提供具体例子或统计来支持观点。避免填充词并把句子分成2–3句以提高清晰度。
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in China, especially shared bikes. They are cheap and convenient for short trips, so many people use them daily. For example, in my city there are thousands of dockless bikes and apps that make renting one quick and easy.
× Yes, I have bike.
✓ Yes, I had a bike.
问题类型ID:6(现在时错误)和5(过去时使用)。原句使用现在时“have”与提问中“when you were a child”表示过去时间不一致,应使用过去时“had”。另外缺少冠词“a”。建议:当说过去发生的事情时,把动词改为过去式;名词前注意使用不定冠词a/an。示例:"I had a bike."
× I have 2-3 or four bike at my middle school and high school.
✓ I had two, three, or four bikes in middle school and high school.
问题类型ID:1(单复数)和22(冠词/数词表达)。原句数词混用不规范,应写出具体数字连接词要一致,名词“bike”应为复数“bikes”;时态需与过去一致改为“had”;介词地点用in更自然。建议:使用一致的数字表达,用复数形式,保持时态一致。示例:"I had two, three, or four bikes in middle school and high school."
× But uh, I have the, uh, somebody just, uh, stole my bike.
✓ But somebody once stole one of them / But someone once stole my bike.
问题类型ID:12(代词使用不当)和26(句子结构错误)。原句混用了现在时“have”与过去时“stole”,并且插入“the”不合适,造成结构混乱。应把时态统一为过去时:要么说“someone stole my bike”要么更明确“someone once stole one of them”。建议:去掉多余的填充词,统一时态,代词使用要与名词一致。示例:"But someone once stole my bike."
× Yes, it is a very popular in China as now people use share bike every day is a very cheap, oh cheap and uh convenient to use, so we like.
✓ Yes, they are very popular in China. Nowadays people use shared bikes every day because they are very cheap and convenient to use, so we like them.
问题类型ID:12(代词使用错误)、17(定冠词使用不当)和1(单复数)。原句将“bikes”当作不可数单一体用“it”,应使用复数“they”。短语“share bike”应为形容词形式“shared bikes”或“shared bike service(s)”。此外句子时态和连接词需调整,删除多余语气词。建议:名词复数配合复数代词,使用正确形容词形式,句子分为几部分以保持清晰。示例:"Yes, they are very popular in China. Nowadays people use shared bikes every day because they are very cheap and convenient to use, so we like them."