Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is too short and lacks detail. Start with a clear topic sentence and add one or two supporting details (when you had it, what kind, and a brief memory). Keep it natural and avoid single-word replies.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought for me when I was six, and I remember riding it around the park every weekend until I learned to balance on my own.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but is long, repetitive and has grammatical errors. Use a clear topic sentence, then give two specific supporting points with linking words (for example, because / for instance). Keep sentences concise and correct verb forms and pluralization.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many cities have well-marked bike lanes, so people often cycle to work to avoid traffic. In addition, public bike-sharing schemes are widely available, which makes cycling convenient for short trips.

× It is true that bikes are popular in our country as one of the usual ways for commuters to transport around different places and there are a lot of bike lanes in the place I live in where I see many people could try could travel with their own bikes or with bikes that has public usage for everyone to use.

✓ It is true that bikes are popular in our country as a usual way for commuters to get around, and there are a lot of bike lanes where I live. I see many people traveling on their own bikes or using public shared bikes.

This sentence has multiple issues: run-on structure, incorrect verb forms, subject-verb agreement, and awkward phrasing. Problems fall under 'Sentence structure errors' (26), 'Verb in the present participle form' (10), and 'Subject-verb agreement errors' (27). Specific errors and fixes: 1) The original combined several ideas into one long sentence; split into two sentences to improve clarity. 2) 'one of the usual ways for commuters to transport around different places' is unidiomatic; replace with 'a usual way for commuters to get around'. 3) 'could try could travel' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'traveling' (present participle) in the second sentence to describe ongoing action. 4) 'bikes that has public usage for everyone to use' has subject-verb agreement and awkward noun phrase; change to 'public shared bikes'. Suggestions: keep sentences concise, use standard verbs (get around, travel), ensure verbs match subjects, and prefer 'shared bikes' or 'public bikes' for clarity.