Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yet I had a buy. Wanna shine?
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
MMM I think so but people like my the motorcycle more.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: คำตอบไม่ชัดเจนและมีข้อผิดพลาดทางไวยากรณ์ ควรตอบโดยตรงด้วยประโยคหัวข้อ แล้วเสริมรายละเอียดที่ชัดเจน เช่น อายุเมื่อเริ่มขี่ สถานที่ที่ขี่ หรือความทรงจำสั้นๆ พูดให้เป็นประโยคที่สมบูรณ์ ใช้คำเชื่อมถ้าจำเป็น และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. I received it as a birthday present when I was eight and used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon. Riding my bike helped me make friends and explore nearby parks. I especially remember learning to ride on a quiet street near my home.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: คำตอบสั้นและไม่เป็นทางการ มีข้อผิดพลาดในการเรียงคำและไวยากรณ์ ควรให้หัวข้อที่ชัดเจน ตามด้วยเหตุผลหรือเปรียบเทียบที่เจาะจง เช่นสาเหตุที่มอเตอร์ไซค์ได้รับความนิยม (ความสะดวก ความเร็ว ต้นทุน) และใช้คำเชื่อมเพื่อความลื่นไหล
Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are somewhat popular, but motorcycles are more common. Motorcycles are faster and more convenient for commuting in busy cities, and they are often cheaper to buy and maintain than cars. As a result, many people choose motorcycles for daily travel.
× Yet I had a buy. Wanna shine?
✓ Yes, I had a bike. Do you mean 'When I was a child'?
The original contains multiple problems: 'Yet' is incorrect as a response word and confuses sentence meaning; 'had a buy' is wrong word choice (buy is a noun/verb, not the item) and likely intended 'bike'; 'Wanna shine?' is an informal contracted question that doesn't make sense in context. Correct by using 'Yes' as a simple affirmative, replace 'buy' with the noun 'bike', and form a clear question if the student is asking for clarification — use 'Do you mean...?' or simply omit the clarification. Suggestion: respond with a clear simple past statement to match the examiner's past-tense question: 'Yes, I had a bike.' Given instruction: Grammar problem type ID:26
× MMM I think so but people like my the motorcycle more.
✓ Mmm, I think so, but people in my country prefer motorcycles more.
Problems: incorrect pronoun and article order 'my the motorcycle' is ungrammatical; 'like... more' is acceptable but 'prefer' is a better collocation; missing specification 'in my country' to answer the examiner's question about popularity. Correction fixes word order, article use, and verb choice. Suggestions: use 'people in my country' to clarify, 'prefer motorcycles' for natural collocation and plural form to indicate general preference. Given instruction: Grammar problem type ID:26