Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I uh, had a bike when I were a child and my dad, uh, have been, uh, have bought a bike for me and I have been, uh, riding of this, uh, which is comfort, which was comfortable and, uh, good looking for me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Uh, as far as I know, bites are not popular in my country, uh, because everyone, uh, have a car, uh, who drive it, uh, and despite uh, being not a popular, uh, being not a part, being not a popular box, uh, there are uh.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: Старайтесь говорить грамотно и связно: используйте правильные времена и согласование (например, «I had» вместо «I were»), избегайте частых заполнителей («uh», «um») и повторов. Начинайте с чёткой темы (например, «Yes, I had a bike») и добавляйте 1–2 конкретных подробности (кто купил, каким был велосипед, какие чувства вы испытывали). Используйте связки («because», «so», «it was») для логики и ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений.
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me, and it was comfortable and good-looking. I used to ride it every afternoon around the neighbourhood, and I remember feeling very proud when I learned to ride without training wheels.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Говорите более уверенно и ясно: начните с прямого ответа («No, they are not very popular») и затем приведите 1–2 конкретные причины с простыми связками (например, «because» и «however»). Избегайте бессвязных повторов и неверного согласования (например, «people have cars»). Если хотите, приведите пример или исключение для иллюстрации.
Ví dụ: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer to drive cars for convenience. However, they are more common in some cities where traffic is heavy and cycling lanes are available, especially among students and delivery workers.
× Uh, yes, I uh, had a bike when I were a child and my dad, uh, have been, uh, have bought a bike for me and I have been, uh, riding of this, uh, which is comfort, which was comfortable and, uh, good looking for me.
✓ Uh, yes, I had a bike when I was a child and my dad bought a bike for me and I used to ride it, which was comfortable and good-looking to me.
Ошибка согласования подлежащего и глагола: 'were' следует заменить на 'was' для единственного числа первого лица в прошедшем времени. Также глагол 'have been... have bought' некорректен в контексте простого прошедшего; следует использовать 'bought'. Конструкция 'have been riding of this' неверна: правильно 'used to ride it' или 'rode it'. Советы: для описания привычек в прошлом используйте 'used to' или простое прошедшее; используйте правильную форму прошедшего времени для глаголов и согласовывайте подлежащее и сказуемое.'},{
× Uh, as far as I know, bites are not popular in my country, uh, because everyone, uh, have a car, uh, who drive it, uh, and despite uh, being not a popular, uh, being not a part, being not a popular box, uh, there are uh.
✓ Uh, as far as I know, bikes are not popular in my country because everyone has a car and drives it, and despite not being very popular, there are still some cyclists.
Несколько ошибок: 'bites' — орфографическая ошибка; должно быть 'bikes' (множественное число). 'everyone have' — неверное согласование: с indefinite pronoun everyone используется глагол в третьем лице единственного числа 'has'. 'who drive it' — согласование и форма: 'and drives it'. Фразы 'being not a popular' и 'being not a part' неестественны; лучше 'not being very popular'. Советы: используйте 'everyone has' для общих утверждений, проверяйте правописание слов и упрощайте фразы для ясности.'