Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant and shows feeling, but it is slightly long and repetitive. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two concise supporting details with linking words. Avoid repeating ideas (e.g., "grateful" and "made an effort" express similar points). Also try to vary vocabulary and include a brief specific detail (like when you got it or how you used it).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did — I received a bicycle when I was about eight. I was very grateful because my parents had to save up for it, and I remember riding it to school and around the neighborhood every afternoon. This made me confident and independent as a child.

Gợi ý: The answer addresses the question but is unclear in places and contains a vague phrase ('unexpected'). Start with a direct statement, then give two clear reasons with linking words. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'affordable', 'practical') and add a specific example or comparison to strengthen your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and practical for short trips. For example, many people use them to commute to work or college, and in cities with heavy traffic they are often faster than cars.

× many people can afford it.

✓ many people can afford them.

The noun 'bikes' in the previous clause is plural, so the pronoun referring back to it should also be plural. Using 'it' (singular) causes a mismatch. Replace 'it' with 'them' to match the plural antecedent: 'many people can afford them.' Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with the nouns they refer to.

× because they are unexpected, not so expensive, I want to say, and many people can afford it.

✓ because they are inexpensive and many people can afford them.

'Unexpected' is the wrong adjective here; the intended meaning is likely 'inexpensive' or 'not expensive.' Also the parenthetical phrase 'I want to say' is unnecessary and interrupts fluency. Combine ideas into a concise phrase: 'because they are inexpensive and many people can afford them.' Suggestion: choose adjectives that match intended meaning and remove filler phrases for clarity.