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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I think so. Uh, bikes are popular in my country, however we don't have a convenient infrastructure for bikers.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: Ответ слишком короткий и не соответствует вопросу — студент повторил вопрос вместо ответа. Необходимо давать прямой ответ и развивать его конкретными деталями: сказать «да» или «нет», добавить короткое описание велосипеда, когда и с кем катались, и использовать связующие слова для логики.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought me when I was six. I used to ride it every afternoon around the park near our house, and sometimes my older brother would come with me. Because the neighborhood was quiet, I felt safe practicing tricks and learning to ride without training wheels.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Ответ понятный, но краткий и содержит паузу («uh»). Нужно расширить мысль конкретными деталями и примерами, использовать связку для противопоставления («however») более плавно и избегать разговорных заполнителей. Добавьте конкретные факты: где популярны велосипеды, кто их использует, и как отсутствующая инфраструктура влияет на людей.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular, especially among students and people who commute short distances. For example, many university students use bikes to get to campus because it's cheap and fast. However, cycling would be even more widespread if cities invested in dedicated bike lanes and secure parking, since at the moment many riders feel unsafe on busy roads.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

This sentence is grammatically correct and matches the past tense question form. No correction needed. Suggestion: No change required.

Sentence structure errors

× Yeah, I think so. Uh, bikes are popular in my country, however we don't have a convenient infrastructure for bikers.

Yes, I think so. Bikes are popular in my country; however, we don't have convenient infrastructure for cyclists.

The original contains style and word-choice issues rather than strict grammar mistakes listed. Improvements: replace informal 'Yeah' with 'Yes' to suit a test context; remove filler 'Uh'; use a semicolon before 'however' or split into two sentences and add a comma after 'however'; use 'infrastructure' without 'a' because 'infrastructure' is uncountable; use 'cyclists' instead of 'bikers' for more appropriate register. Suggested revision preserves present-tense general statement and contrasts it with the following clause.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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