Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a pink one. I liked it very much and my father taught me how to ride bike when I was young.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, bikes are very popular in our country and because people can ride bike to work and also to school and nowadays we have shared bikes which make it easier for people to find bikes to drive to underground station or other nearby places.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 答案总体自然且信息清楚,但可以更直接地以主题句开头,去掉重复表述,并用一两个连接词补充具体细节(如学会骑车的年龄或一次难忘的经历)以丰富内容。注意将“ride bike”改为正确的动词短语“ride a bike”。最多保持在3–4句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a pink bike when I was a child. My father taught me to ride a bike when I was about six, and I remember falling off once but getting back up quickly. That bike was my favorite toy and I rode it to visit friends in the neighborhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答切题且内容丰富,但语句较长且有些重复,应分两句表达并使用连词和更准确的词汇(例如“ride a bike”,“commute”或“subway station”)。可加入具体例子或比较(例如在城市与乡村的差异)以增加细节和说服力。保持3–4句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work or school. In cities, shared bike services are common and make it easy to get to the subway station. In rural areas people still prefer personal bikes for short trips.
× I liked it very much and my father taught me how to ride bike when I was young.
✓ I liked it very much and my father taught me how to ride a bike when I was young.
错误类型:介词/冠词使用错误(此处为冠词问题,归入“介词使用错误”类别)。说明:英语中可数名词单数前通常需要不定冠词a/an。原句中“ride bike”缺少冠词,应为“ride a bike”。建议:记住可数名词单数要加a/an,练习造句如“ride a bike / drive a car / read a book”。
× Yes, bikes are very popular in our country and because people can ride bike to work and also to school and nowadays we have shared bikes which make it easier for people to find bikes to drive to underground station or other nearby places.
✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our country because people can ride bikes to work and to school, and nowadays we have shared bikes which make it easier for people to find bikes to ride to the underground station or to other nearby places.
错误类型:介词/冠词使用错误及复数/单数一致。说明:句中多处问题:1) “ride bike”应为“ride bikes”或“ride a bike”,此处泛指应用复数bikes;2) 複合句中缺少逗号及连词使结构混乱,需加“and”连接并分隔子句;3) “underground station”前应加定冠词“the”表示特指(上下文指某类地铁站),且“drive to underground station”用词不当,骑车应用“ride”;4) “to work and to school”中“to”可重复以保持平行结构。建议:注意可数名词单复数,保持动词和名词的一致性,使用适当的冠词(a/an/the),并保持并列短语的平行结构;把“drive”用于开车,骑车用“ride”。