Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Pronunciation, grammar and clarity need improvement. Correct the noun error (bite → bike) and remove repetition. Use a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (max 3–4 sentences). Also use one linking phrase if adding detail (for example, “and”, “because”, or “I remember that…”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a beautiful bike when I was a child. I used to ride it to my friend’s house every afternoon, and I remember the freedom I felt cycling around the neighborhood. It was bright red and had a bell that I loved.

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, verb forms and sentence structure. Use a clear topic sentence and a linking word to contrast past and present (for example, “however” or “in the past”). Avoid repetition (don’t repeat “nowadays” twice) and give a specific reason or example to support your view. Keep answers concise and coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are much more popular in my country now. In the past people preferred cars, but recently more people cycle because cities have built new bike lanes and bicycles are cheaper than before.

× Yes, nowadays bike are really popular in my country and but in past there are they aren't as popular as nowadays.

✓ Yes, nowadays bikes are really popular in my country, but in the past they weren't as popular as they are now.

The sentence has singular/plural errors and awkward word order. 'Bike are' should be plural noun + plural verb: 'bikes are'. 'in past' needs the article 'the' -> 'in the past'. The clause 'there are they aren't as popular as nowadays' mixes structures; use 'they weren't as popular as they are now' to compare past and present. Also remove redundant 'and' before 'but.' Suggestions: use correct plural form for countable nouns, include definite article with 'past' when contrasting, and maintain parallel structure when comparing time periods.

× Yes, I had a beautiful bite when I was when I was child and I had a great memory of that.

✓ Yes, I had a beautiful bike when I was a child and I have great memories of it.

Errors: 'bite' is a misspelling of 'bike' (not a grammar problem but corrected). 'when I was when I was child' repeats phrase; remove repetition. 'child' needs the article 'a' -> 'a child'. The original used past 'I had' and then 'I had a great memory' which is grammatical but sounds better to link past possession with present recollection: 'I have great memories of it.' If you want to keep past: 'I had a great memory of it.' Suggestions: avoid repetition, include articles with singular nouns, and choose tense to reflect whether the memory remains (present perfect 'have memories') or is strictly past.