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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have a bike when I was a child. It is a blue colour bike. It is bought by my father for my birthday present.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, very popular in my country because cars are very expensive and and many office worker prefer to buy a bicycle instead of car.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Correct the tense and make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "bike" and "bicycle") and unnecessary words like "colour" after the adjective. Use past simple for past events and passive or active appropriately.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did — I had a small blue bike when I was a child. My father bought it for my birthday, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: Make the answer into a clear topic sentence followed by a specific reason with correct grammar and linking words. Fix plural/singular agreement and remove duplicate words. Give one concrete example or brief comparison to strengthen the point.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because cars are expensive and many office workers choose bikes for commuting. For example, in cities with heavy traffic, cycling is often faster and much cheaper than driving.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have a bike when I was a child.

Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with a past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'had' to match the past time frame. Suggestion: use past tense consistently for events in the past (I had, I went, etc.).

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It is a blue colour bike.

It was a blue bike.

The phrase 'blue colour bike' is unnatural and the tense should match the past reference. Use the adjective 'blue' directly before the noun: 'a blue bike'. Also change to past tense 'was' to agree with 'when I was a child'.

Incorrect use of the passive/Verb in the past participle form

× It is bought by my father for my birthday present.

It was bought by my father as a birthday present for me.

The original uses present simple passive 'is bought' for a past event; use past passive 'was bought'. Also 'for my birthday present' is awkward—'as a birthday present for me' is natural word order. Ensure tense and word order are appropriate.

Present tense issue

× Yes, very popular in my country because cars are very expensive and and many office worker prefer to buy a bicycle instead of car.

Yes, they are very popular in my country because cars are very expensive and many office workers prefer to buy a bicycle instead of a car.

Multiple issues: subject and verb missing at the start—add 'they are' to form a complete present simple sentence. Remove duplicate 'and'. 'Office worker' should be plural 'office workers' to match 'many'. Use third person plural verb 'prefer' (already present). Add the article 'a' before 'car'. Maintain present simple to answer the general question about current popularity.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ExpensiveCostly
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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