Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense and phrasing (e.g., use 'I liked' or 'I used to' instead of 'I would like to'). Avoid repetition and irrelevant words like extra 'yes' or filler sounds.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me and taught me how to ride, so I became confident on two wheels. As a result, I often rode my bike to visit friends or explore the neighborhood.

Gợi ý: Provide a direct opinion first, then support it with specific, coherent reasons. Use linking words (for example, because, for instance, therefore) and avoid fillers and vague phrases. Give concrete examples or comparisons to strengthen your point.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many families and groups of friends ride them for leisure. For example, I often see parents cycling with their children in parks and groups of students cycling together after classes, which shows biking is both recreational and common.

× Yes, when I was a child, I would like to.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I liked it.

The student used 'would like to' which expresses a present habitual desire, not a past habit. The question asks about the past (when I was a child), so use past tense 'liked' to indicate preference in the past. Suggestion: use simple past for past habits or 'used to' for repeated past actions (e.g., 'I used to like it').

× My father bought me a bike and led me to practice this.

✓ My father bought me a bike and taught me how to ride it.

'Led me to practice this' is unnatural and unclear. For past events, use past tense verbs with clear action: 'taught me how to ride it' correctly uses simple past and a clear verb. Also replace 'this' with 'it' to refer to the bike. Suggestion: use 'taught me to ride' or 'showed me how to ride'.

× So since then I know how to ride a bike well.

✓ Since then I have known how to ride a bike well.

The phrase 'since then' requires present perfect tense to connect past event to present state. 'I know' is simple present and does not emphasize continuity from past to present. Use present perfect 'have known' for an action starting in the past and continuing now. Suggestion: use 'I have known' or rephrase as 'I have been able to ride a bike well since then'.

× So whenever I want to go some somewhere I would like to ride a bike.

✓ So whenever I want to go somewhere, I like to ride a bike.

The sentence has an extra word 'some' before 'where' and uses 'would like to' awkwardly for habitual action. Remove 'some' and use simple present 'I like to ride' for habitual actions in general. Also add a comma for clarity. Suggestion: use 'I like to ride a bike' for habits.

× So actually I think it is yes, because, uh, when I hang out with my friends, I so many uh, people riding a bike with their like parents or their friends, umm, riding together and having something fun.

✓ So actually I think so, because when I hang out with my friends, I see many people riding bikes with their parents or friends, riding together and having fun.

Multiple errors: 'I think it is yes' is awkward—use 'I think so'. 'I so many people' is ungrammatical; likely intended verb 'see' is missing and should be conjugated as 'I see many people'. 'Riding a bike' should be plural 'riding bikes' to match 'many people'. 'Their like parents' is filler; use 'their parents'. 'Having something fun' is incorrect collocation—use 'having fun'. Suggestions: include the verb 'see', use plural nouns with 'many', and use correct collocations like 'having fun'.

× They are lasting together and I think it is really a great example.

✓ They stay together and I think it is really a great example.

'Are lasting together' is incorrect collocation; use 'stay together' or 'spend time together'. 'Last' is intransitive in time contexts and not used this way. Use simple present 'stay' for habitual/general statements. Also 'it' is vague but acceptable; consider 'this' or 'that' depending on context. Suggestion: say 'They stay together' or 'They spend time together', and 'this is a great example'.