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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, add my child I like buy bike because they that is my first study sport. Thank you.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, of course, because in China Brexit is a popular sport and more and more people like buy bikes is cool.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 28.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答需要更清晰和连贯。首先直接回答问题,然后用一两句具体细节支持。注意语法(过去式、代词和词序),避免无关词语(如“Thank you”)。可以提到什么时候有自行车、谁送的、你如何使用它或为什么喜欢。建议把句子控制在最多五句内,并使用连接词(例如“because”,“so”)。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight, which my parents bought for me. I rode it to visit friends and to practice cycling in the park, and I remember it was my favorite toy because it made me feel free.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 32.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更准确并使用恰当词汇。先给出直接观点,然后用一两条具体原因支持。注意不要使用错误词汇(例如“Brexit”在这里不合适),改用“cycling”或“bicycles”。注意语法:主谓一致、动词形式和连词。提供具体例子(比如城市通勤、共享单车)会更有说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country. Many people use bikes for short trips and commuting, and the rise of bike-sharing services has made cycling more convenient in cities. As a result, more people see cycling as a healthy and eco-friendly choice.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, add my child I like buy bike because they that is my first study sport. Thank you.

Yes. When I was a child I liked to ride a bike because it was my first sport. Thank you.

句子结构混乱、词序不当且动词形式错误。原句有许多多余或错误的词(如“add”,“they that”,“study”用错)。改正后按时态与意思重构为完整句:使用过去时 liked 表示过去习惯,使用不定式 to ride 或短语 ride a bike 表示动作,使用 it 指代单车,was my first sport 表达“是我第一个接触的运动”。建议用简单句子表达,确保主语、谓语、宾语顺序清晰,并使用正确的动词形式和代词。

Incorrect use of words/word choice

× Yes, of course, because in China Brexit is a popular sport and more and more people like buy bikes is cool.

Yes, of course. In China cycling is a popular sport, and more and more people think riding bikes is cool.

原句中词汇使用错误(将“Brexit”误用,实际应为与骑行相关词,如 cycling 或 riding),并且在并列句中缺少适当的动词结构(should be 'people think riding bikes is cool' 或 'people like riding bikes')。改写为 'cycling is a popular sport' 修正名词使用,使用 think 或 like 后接动名词 riding,保持主谓一致并改善语义。建议注意词汇选择,避免拼写或词义混淆,并使用动名词或不定式来表达喜欢的动作。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CoolChilly; Unenthusiastic; Calm; Bold; Fashionable
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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