Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
In my country they use some many of buys during the morning.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: This answer is too short and contains a tense error. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense (e.g., “Yes, I did”). Then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who you rode with, or a memorable moment). Use linking words like “when” or “and” to make it coherent, and keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had an old blue bicycle that I rode to school every day when I was about eight. I often rode with my friend after classes, and we would race along the river path until sunset.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: The answer has grammar and vocabulary mistakes and is unclear. Begin with a direct opinion (e.g., “Yes, they are quite popular”), then give a specific reason and an example. Use correct vocabulary (bikes) and simple linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Keep it concise and avoid redundancy.
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in the mornings, because many people cycle to work or school to avoid traffic. For example, you can see crowded bike lanes near the train stations during rush hour.
× Yes, I do.
✓ Yes, I did.
The question 'Did you have a bike when you were a child?' is in the past tense. The student's reply should also be in the past tense to match. Using 'do' is present tense; use 'did' to indicate a past possession. Suggestion: answer past-tense questions with past-tense verbs (Did you have? -> Yes, I did.).
× In my country they use some many of buys during the morning.
✓ In my country many people use bikes in the morning.
This sentence has multiple problems but the primary issues that match the provided list are incorrect use of quantifiers and word choice. 'Some many of' is ungrammatical; use 'many' or 'a lot of' with a countable noun. 'Buys' is a misspelling/wrong word for 'bikes'. Also word order and verb choice were awkward: 'they use many people' is wrong; the intended meaning is that many people use bikes. To improve: use 'many people' as the subject and 'use bikes' as the object: 'Many people use bikes in the morning.' Or 'In my country, many people ride bikes in the morning.'