Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant but a bit short and slightly stiff. Improve by starting with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode, who you rode with, or a brief memory). Use a linking word to connect the sentences and keep total length under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I rode it almost every day around my neighborhood and to school, usually with my friends on weekends. Because the roads near our house were quiet, I felt safe practicing new tricks and gained a lot of confidence.

Gợi ý: Your answer gives a clear opinion but the explanation is vague and the sentence structure is awkward. Improve by using a clear topic sentence, then provide one or two specific reasons or examples to support your view. Use linking words (for example, because/for instance) and correct collocations (e.g., "engage in sports" or "do work"). Keep it concise and natural.

Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many children spend their time helping with family chores or studying, so they have less free time for cycling. As a result, biking is more common in rural areas where people use bikes for short trips rather than as a popular pastime.

× As a child, I owned one bike that I used to ride every day.

✓ As a child, I owned a bike that I used to ride every day.

Using 'one bike' is grammatically acceptable but sounds unnatural in this context; native speakers typically use the indefinite article 'a' with singular, countable nouns. Replace 'one bike' with 'a bike' for natural phrasing and fluency. Suggestion: use 'a' before singular countable nouns when quantity is 'one' but not being emphasized.

× No, they're not really popular because kids don't really engage in such things rather than that they are put in different type of works since their childhood.

✓ No, they're not really popular because kids don't engage in such activities; instead, they are put to different kinds of work from childhood.

This sentence has multiple problems: 'engage in such things' is awkward — use 'engage in such activities' (word choice, falls under sentence structure and incorrect conjunction). The phrase 'rather than that they are put in different type of works since their childhood' is ungrammatical. Use a contrasting connector like 'instead' and correct noun forms: 'different kinds of work' (plural) and 'from childhood' to express time. Also use present simple 'don't engage' to match general statement. Suggestion: simplify contrast with 'instead' and correct noun forms and time expression.