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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yeah, I have a red bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yeah, bikes are popular in our country.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 句子时态和语法不一致,表达比较简单且不够具体。建议:1) 注意使用正确的过去时(如“had”而不是“have”);2) 开头用一个主题句直接回答,然后用1–2个具体细节扩展(例如谁送你的、常去哪里骑、你为什么喜欢);3) 使用连词(例如“because”, “so”, “when”)使句子更连贯。举例结构:直接回答 + 一个原因或例子 + 一个简短结果或感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a red bike when I was a child. It was a gift from my parents, and I used to ride it to a nearby park every weekend because I loved feeling the wind and freedom.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺乏细节与连贯性。建议:1) 先直接给出立场(Yes/No),接着用原因和具体例子支持你的观点;2) 使用连接词(例如“because”, “for example”, “also”)来组织信息;3) 提供一到两个具体事实或比较(例如城市交通、环保、健身或通勤习惯)。

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in big cities there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing programs, so cycling is both convenient and environmentally friendly.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yeah, I have a red bike when I was a child.

Yeah, I had a red bike when I was a child.

问题类型:现在时使用不当。句子中提到的是过去的时间状语“when I was a child”,主句也应使用过去时。原句用了现在时“have”,与时间不一致。建议将动词改为过去式“had”。

Present tense issue

× Yeah, bikes are popular in our country.

Yeah, bikes are popular in my country.

问题类型:代词使用/指代选择(属于代词使用类)。考官问的是关于“your country”,回答时应使用与提问者一致的第一人称所属关系“my country”,而原句用“our country”会造成指代不明确或不符合语境。建议将“our”改为“my”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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