Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I did.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Maybe it's popular in my country, but in my city, uh, less people, uh, ride back.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且简短,但过于简单,缺乏细节和扩展。按照评分规则应有主题句并适当补充细节(如什么时候、有何用途、感受或例子)。可以用连接词自然延展,使答案更丰富且长度不超5句。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, which I used to ride to my friend's house every afternoon. It helped me gain confidence and independence, and I remember practicing tricks with my brother on weekends.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 答案含糊且有语音填充词(uh),句子不够清晰,且有语法和用词错误('ride back'不合适)。应直接给出观点,然后用具体原因或例子支持观点,使用连接词如 'however' 或 'but' 来衔接对比。保持句子流畅并避免填充词。
Ví dụ: I think bicycles are fairly popular in the country overall; many people use them in rural areas for short trips. However, in my city fewer people cycle because public transport is convenient and the roads can be unsafe for cyclists.
× Maybe it's popular in my country, but in my city, uh, less people, uh, ride back.
✓ Maybe they're popular in my country, but in my city, fewer people ride bikes.
句子中存在代词和数量词用法不当。英文中“bikes”是复数名词,前文用代词应与之保持一致,不能用“it's”(it is,指单数)来指代复数名词,正确应为“they're”。另外,“less people”在表达可数名词的减少时应使用“fewer”而非“less”。“ride back”不是固定搭配;根据语境应使用“ride bikes”。建议:1) 当指代复数名词时使用复数代词(they/them/they're);2) 可数名词的数量减少用“fewer”,不可数名词用“less”;3) 常用搭配为“ride bikes”。