Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe for the area we lived in. I usually walked to school or took the bus and I only tried cycling occasionally at friends houses.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, because we don't have professional areas for us to ride a bike.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答总体清晰但可以改进:1) 开头应更直接一句话回应问题(主题句),然后用1–2句具体补充理由或例子;2) 注意连贯性,使用连接词如“because”,“so”,“however”来衔接信息;3) 细节可以更具体(例如孩子时的年龄、一次具体的骑车体验或父母的担忧);4) 控制句子数量不超过5句并避免冗余。
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents thought cycling was unsafe in our neighborhood because traffic was heavy, so I usually walked to school or took the bus. I only rode a bike occasionally at a friend’s house, and I remember once falling and scraping my knee, which made my parents more cautious.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答过于简短且缺乏扩展:1) 先直接回答(Yes/No/Partly),然后用1–2句具体解释原因并给出例子或比较;2) 使用连接词如“because”,“however”,“for example”增强逻辑;3) 提供更具体的细节(例如城市与乡村差异、共享单车的情况、基础设施缺乏的影响)。
Ví dụ: Not really. Bikes aren’t very popular in most cities because there are few dedicated cycle lanes and traffic can be dangerous, so many people prefer buses or cars. However, cycling is more common in smaller towns where roads are quieter and people use bikes for short trips.
× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought it was unsafe for the area we lived in. I usually walked to school or took the bus and I only tried cycling occasionally at friends houses.
✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents thought the area we lived in was unsafe. I usually walked to school or took the bus, and I only tried cycling occasionally at friends' houses.
问题类型:过去时与句子结构。解释:原句中“because my parents thought it was unsafe for the area we lived in.” 的语序和搭配不自然,建议改成“thought the area we lived in was unsafe”以保持过去时的正确表达和更自然的英语语序;此外“friends houses”缺少所有格撇号,应为“friends' houses”;复合句中并列分句之间加逗号更清晰。改进建议:将原因从“thought it was unsafe for the area we lived in”调整为“thought the area we lived in was unsafe”,在复数名词所有格处加撇号,并在并列句前加逗号。
× No, because we don't have professional areas for us to ride a bike.
✓ No, because we don't have dedicated areas for us to ride bikes.
问题类型:介词/搭配使用不当(属于介词及词组搭配问题)。解释:“professional areas” 用法不自然,通常不会说“professional areas”表示骑车场地,建议用“dedicated areas”或“designated areas”;“ride a bike”在泛指多人人称时可改为复数“ride bikes”或不定冠词形式。改进建议:使用更常见的搭配如“dedicated/designated areas”来表达专门的骑行场地,并根据语境把“ride a bike”改为“ride bikes”。