Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is difficult to follow because of grammar errors, unclear vocabulary, and lack of a clear structure. Aim to give a direct topic sentence (yes/no and brief info), then one or two supporting details with clear linking words. Use correct past tense and precise words (e.g., "bike" instead of "bite"). Keep it under five sentences and avoid fillers like "uh."

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child — my parents gave it to me for my 10th birthday. I rode it almost every day to visit friends and explore my neighborhood, and sometimes my brother and I raced each other for fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer expresses a clear opinion but lacks clarity, specific examples, and coherent linking. Improve by stating the opinion clearly, then give specific reasons and one concrete example. Use linking words such as "because" and "for example," and avoid vague phrases like "very rich and OK."

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Bikes are especially popular in cities because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, many students use bicycles to commute to school or to meet friends, and there are also weekend cycling groups that tour local parks.

× Yes, I have a variety when I was a period of my father and mother brought me a bite, uh, where my 17th birthday and I used to write in your wife sometime my brother.

✓ Yes. My parents bought me a bike when I was a child, around my 17th birthday, and I used to ride it with my brother sometimes.

Original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: incorrect word choices ('variety', 'bite', 'write', 'wife') and disordered clauses. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' (ID 26). Suggestions: use clear subject-verb-object order, choose correct vocabulary (bike instead of bite), use time expressions correctly ('when I was a child', 'around my 17th birthday'), and separate ideas into shorter clauses: 'My parents bought me a bike... and I used to ride it with my brother sometimes.' Next steps: practice rewriting run-on or mixed-up sentences into simple sentences, and check each word for correct spelling and meaning.

× Oh yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country, especially in cities because many students are lively riding and we meet with their friends or any tours of riding.

✓ Oh yes, definitely. Bikes are popular in my country, especially in cities, because many students like riding them and meet with their friends for rides or short tours.

The sentence misuses verb forms and collocations, showing present tense and word choice problems (ID 6: Present tense issue). 'many students are lively riding' is ungrammatical — correct is 'students like riding them'. 'we meet with their friends' mixes pronouns; use 'meet with their friends' or 'meet friends'. Also 'any tours of riding' is incorrect collocation; use 'rides or short tours'. Suggestions: use simple present for habitual actions ('students like riding'), maintain consistent subject pronouns, and use common collocations ('go for a ride', 'short tours'). Next steps: practice forming present simple statements about habits and pair verbs with appropriate objects ('ride a bike', 'like riding').

× That's why uh, and bikes are very rich and OK.

✓ That's why bikes are very common and affordable.

The phrase 'bikes are very rich and OK' uses incorrect adjectives (ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). 'Rich' does not describe bikes; likely intended 'cheap' or 'common'. 'OK' is vague; use 'affordable' or 'popular'. Suggestions: choose adjectives that logically describe the noun: 'common', 'affordable', 'popular'. Next steps: expand vocabulary for describing popularity and cost and avoid vague terms like 'OK'.