Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural, start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear specific reason and briefly add a relevant detail. Avoid repeating the same idea. Use a linking word to connect the reason and the example.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike as a child. I couldn’t ride one well, so my parents never bought one; for example, every time I tried I would fall or feel unsteady, so they preferred I learn later.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer topic sentence and support it with a specific reason or example using a linking word. Mention who uses bikes and in what situations to make the answer more informative and natural.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For instance, many students and office workers cycle for short trips because it’s cheaper and faster than crowded buses, especially in the city center.

× No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to use the bike.

✓ No, I did not have a bike when I was a child because I didn't know how to ride one.

The phrase 'use the bike' is unnatural for riding; use 'ride' plus pronoun 'one' to avoid repetition. Also 'did not have' and 'didn't know' are correct past tense; change improves verb choice and pronoun reference. Suggestion: Use 'ride' for bicycles and replace repeated noun with 'one' for natural speech.

× I tried many times and I couldn't.

✓ I tried many times, but I couldn't.

Meaning requires a contrast word; inserting 'but' connects the attempts with the inability. Tenses are correct ('tried' and 'couldn't' past), but sentence structure needs conjunction for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'but' to link contrasting clauses.

× Yes, people prefer to use bikes rather than using public transportation.

✓ Yes, people prefer to ride bikes rather than use public transportation.

Parallel structure requires matching forms: 'prefer to ride' vs 'rather use' (both base verbs). 'Use' after 'rather than' should be base form, and 'ride' is more natural than 'use' for bikes. Suggestion: Keep verbs parallel and choose 'ride' for bicycles.