Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more precise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question (e.g. yes/no and age). Use past tense for childhood, avoid filler words (like, basically), and limit to up to 4–5 sentences. Add one specific detail and a linking word to make it coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was about twelve, and I loved riding it. At the weekends I often rode with friends, and sometimes we went on long rides to nearby parks. Because I enjoyed cycling so much, I learned basic bike maintenance from my older cousin.

Gợi ý: Answer more directly and organize your ideas. Start with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons or examples using linking words (for example, because, moreover). Avoid unnecessary details about searching on browsers unless it supports your point, and use correct grammar and concise phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see many commuters cycling to work, and in rural areas people often use bicycles for errands. Furthermore, I personally love bikes and enjoy researching different models online to learn about their features.

× Like yeah, when I was in 12th.

✓ Yes, when I was in 12th grade.

The original uses 'Like yeah' which is colloquial and 'in 12th' is not standard English. This is a present tense/style issue: use a clear past-time phrase. Replace 'Like yeah' with 'Yes' and 'in 12th' with 'in 12th grade' to be grammatically correct and appropriate for the past context.

× I have a bike and I love to ride bikes.

✓ I had a bike and I loved riding it.

The response refers to childhood, so the present tense 'have' and 'love' are inconsistent with the past context. Change to past tense 'had' and use the gerund 'riding' for natural phrasing; use 'it' to avoid unnecessary plural 'bikes' when referring to one bike.

× Basically at weekends I go to hang out with my friends or on a big bike ride.

✓ Basically, on weekends I would hang out with my friends or go on a long bike ride.

The sentence is about habitual past activities, so simple present 'go' is inappropriate. Use 'would' or past tense 'used to' to indicate past habitual actions. Also change 'at weekends' to 'on weekends' and 'big bike ride' to 'long bike ride' for natural collocation.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in every country but for me bike is my love from the childhood.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in many countries, but for me a bike has been my passion since childhood.

'Every country' is an overgeneralization; use 'many countries'. 'Bike is my love from the childhood' is ungrammatical: add an article 'a', use 'has been' to show continuity, and replace 'love' with 'passion' or 'favorite' for natural English. Use 'since childhood' rather than 'from the childhood.'

× I love to ride bikes.

✓ I love riding bikes.

Both 'love to ride' and 'love riding' are acceptable, but after earlier edits use 'riding' for smoother, idiomatic phrasing. This addresses consistency of verb forms.

× I want to see like I search many type of bikes on Google on safari browser and like there is many more bikes are contained in our country.

✓ I often search for many types of bikes on Google or the Safari browser, and there are many models available in our country.

Multiple errors: incorrect verb tense/structure 'I want to see like I search', missing preposition 'search for', incorrect plural 'type' should be 'types', and awkward passive 'are contained'. Use present simple 'search' for habitual action and 'are available' for location. Remove filler 'like' and clarify 'Google or the Safari browser.'

× There is basically my favorite is.

✓ Basically, I have a few favorites.

The original is an incomplete sentence with redundant 'is'. Provide a complete structure: subject and verb. 'I have a few favorites' or 'That is basically my favorite' depending on intended meaning. This fixes sentence fragment and unclear reference.