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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I have.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, but maybe there are some.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: ปรับปรุงคำตอบให้เป็นประโยคที่ถูกต้องตามไวยากรณ์และขยายด้วยรายละเอียดสั้น ๆ เพื่อให้ธรรมชาติและมีสาระมากขึ้น เช่น บอกประเภทจักรยาน ระยะเวลาที่มี หรือกิจกรรมที่ทำร่วมกับจักรยาน ใช้ linking word เล็กน้อย เช่น “and” หรือ “when” เพื่อเชื่อมประโยค

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a red bicycle when I was a child, and I rode it to visit my friends around the neighborhood every afternoon.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: ตอบให้ชัดเจนและให้เหตุผลหรือรายละเอียดสนับสนุน ใช้ linking words เช่น “because” หรือ “however” เพื่อเชื่อมความคิด และให้ตัวอย่างหรือการเปรียบเทียบสั้น ๆ เพื่อทำให้คำตอบน่าเชื่อถือกว่าแค่การเดา

Ví dụ: Not really; bicycles are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or motorbikes for daily commuting. However, they are becoming more common in some cities where cycling lanes have been added.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Yes, I have.

Yes, I did.

The examiner asked a question in the past tense ('Did you have a bike when you were a child?') so the student should answer using the past tense. 'I have' is present tense and does not match the question. Use 'I did' to indicate possession in the past. Suggestion: Respond to past simple questions with past simple verbs (e.g., 'Yes, I did' or 'Yes, I had a bike').

Present tense issue

× No, but maybe there are some.

No, but maybe there were some.

The question asks about popularity 'in your country' generally; however it follows a present-tense question 'Do you think bikes are popular in your country?' The student responded with 'No' then used 'there are some' (present). To be consistent with the present-tense question, better: 'No, but maybe there are some.' If the intended meaning is speculative about current popularity keep present: 'No, but maybe there are some.' If the student meant past childhood context, use past: 'No, but maybe there were some.' The original sentence may be acceptable in present tense; if examiner asked present, keep present. For clarity, use 'No, but maybe there are some' or 'No, but perhaps a few people still ride them.'

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