Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
No, I have not.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I think the banks are popular in our country because our country people like a healthy style lifestyle and by bike and go walk to buy bike and very convenient.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Improve tense accuracy and expand briefly. Use a past tense statement directly answering the question, then add one short supporting detail. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences).
Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one then, so I usually walked to school or used public transport.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Correct vocabulary and grammar, organize into a clear topic sentence plus 1–2 specific supporting details linked with connectors. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases. Use precise words (bikes, healthy lifestyle, convenient, commute, shopping).
Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people prefer cycling because it supports a healthy lifestyle and is a convenient, low-cost way to commute short distances, especially for shopping and commuting to work.
× No, I have not.
✓ No, I didn't.
The examiner asked about a past situation ('when you were a child'), so the student should use the past tense. 'Have not' (present perfect) is used for past actions connected to the present, not for a simple past habit. Use 'didn't' (past simple) to correctly answer a past yes/no question.
× Yeah, I think the banks are popular in our country because our country people like a healthy style lifestyle and by bike and go walk to buy bike and very convenient.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because people here like a healthy lifestyle. They often ride bikes or walk to go shopping because it is very convenient.
Multiple issues: incorrect noun 'banks' should be 'bikes' (word choice), awkward phrase 'our country people' should be 'people here' (pronoun/word order), 'a healthy style lifestyle' is redundant and incorrect — use 'a healthy lifestyle', and verbs are ungrammatical ('by bike and go walk to buy bike' lacks correct verb forms and articles). The correction uses present simple because the question asks about a general truth. Suggestions: use 'people' or 'people here', use 'a healthy lifestyle', use parallel verbs ('ride bikes or walk'), include articles where needed ('a bike'/'go shopping'), and keep sentence structure clear by splitting into two sentences.