Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Good content and clear memory with specific details (color, age, occasion). To improve: (1) Fix the incomplete final sentence so it ends naturally. (2) Keep within five sentences — your answer is long but acceptable if concise. (3) Add a linking word to connect the personal feeling to the preceding action (for example, "because" or "so"). (4) Use varied vocabulary (e.g., "gained confidence" instead of repeating "confidence and freedom").

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small bright-red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I rode it every weekend around the neighborhood with my friends. Learning to ride it gave me a real sense of independence because I could go farther on my own. I remember feeling proud the first time I rode without the training wheels.

Gợi ý: Answer has the right idea but contains grammar and vocabulary errors and is vague. To improve: (1) Correct word choice and remove repetition (e.g., do not say "who write who like" or repeat "bicycle, bikes"). (2) Provide one or two specific supporting details (e.g., examples of cities with bike lanes, statistics, or cultural reasons). (3) Use a linking word to introduce the reason (e.g., "because", "for example"). (4) Keep answer within 3–4 concise sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for commuting and exercise. For example, major cities have extensive bike lanes and there are public bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling convenient. As a result, you often see people of all ages riding to work or school.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

Using 'did have' is grammatically possible but unnecessary in affirmative past simple; the normal form is 'I had'. Use 'did' for emphasis or in negatives/questions. Improve by using simple past 'had' for a natural statement.

× It was a small bright red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my 7th birthday and I used it every weekend to ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

✓ It was a small, bright red bicycle with training wheels that my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it every weekend to ride around the neighborhood with my friends.

The original sentence is long and missing a comma after 'small' and a comma before the conjunction 'and' joining two independent clauses. Also '7th' should be written as 'seventh' in formal prose. Improve by adding commas and writing ordinal numbers in words for clarity and correctness.

× Learning to ride it gave me confidence and freedom, and I still remember how proud I felt when I.

✓ Learning to ride it gave me confidence and freedom, and I still remember how proud I felt when I first rode it.

The clause ends incomplete with 'when I.' It needs a verb phrase to complete the thought. Add 'first rode it' to complete the time clause and clarify the meaning.

× I think so.

✓ I think so.

No grammatical error; sentence is appropriate.

× There are lots of people who write who like riding a bicycle, bikes, and we have very long bicycle tracks.

✓ There are lots of people who like riding bicycles, and we have very long bicycle lanes and tracks.

Original contains 'write who' which is incorrect—likely a typo for 'who'. It also mixes 'bicycle' and 'bikes' redundantly. Use plural 'bicycles' after 'riding' and connect clauses with 'and'. 'Bicycle lanes' is a more natural term; 'tracks' may also be used. Improve by removing the extra word, using consistent nouns, and choosing appropriate terms.