Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural, accurate and coherent: answer directly, correct grammar and avoid unclear phrases. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use past tense consistently and replace unclear parts (e.g., “a blue 1”) with precise descriptions (e.g., “a small blue bike”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small blue bike that I bought myself when I was in middle school. It was lightweight and easy to ride, so I used it every day to go to school and visit friends.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more detailed and cohesive: begin with a clear opinion, then give specific reasons and an example using linking words (e.g., “because,” “for example,” “also”). Avoid vague phrases like “the common bicycle we can borrow” without context — explain what you mean (bike-sharing or public rental).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many cities now have bike-sharing schemes, so people can rent a bicycle for short trips. Also, bikes are practical for commuting in crowded areas and help save money on transport.

× Yes. It's a blue 1.

✓ Yes. It was a blue one.

The student used numeral '1' instead of the word 'one' and the present contraction 'It's' (it is) while referring to a past possession. Use 'one' as a noun and past tense 'was' to match 'Did you have' question. Suggestion: replace '1' with 'one' and use past tense 'was' or 'I had a blue one.'

× I had it in my middle school and I choose it for myself.

✓ I had it in middle school and I chose it myself.

Two tense/pronoun errors: 'choose' is present tense but the action happened in the past so use past tense 'chose'. Also English normally omits the article before 'middle school' when speaking generally, and 'for myself' is unnatural here; 'myself' as a direct object is unnecessary—use 'I chose it myself' or simply 'I chose it.' Suggestion: use past tense verbs to match the past time frame and simplify the phrasing.

× And we have the common bicycle we can borrow.

✓ We also have a public bicycle service that we can borrow from.

The original is unclear and missing an article and linking words. 'The common bicycle we can borrow' lacks proper noun phrase structure. Use 'a public bicycle service' or 'shared bicycles' and include relative or prepositional phrase 'that we can borrow from' to make the sentence grammatical and natural. Suggestion: specify 'shared bicycles' or 'a public bicycle service' depending on intended meaning.

× It's very convenient.

✓ They are very convenient.

Subject disagreement: if referring to shared/public bicycles (plural), use plural pronoun 'they' rather than 'it'. Also keep 'very convenient' as correct adjective phrase. Suggestion: ensure pronoun number matches the noun being referred to.

× It's cheap.

✓ They are cheap.

Same issue as previous: 'it' refers to a singular item, but the student is likely referring to bicycles in general or the shared bikes (plural). Use 'they' for plural. If referring to a service (singular), rephrase to 'It is cheap.' Suggestion: match pronoun number to the noun (singular/plural).