Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 문장이 자연스럽지 않고 문장 구조가 어색합니다. 간결한 주제문으로 시작한 뒤, 연결어를 사용해 추가 정보를 덧붙이세요. 예: 소유 시기와 누가 사줬는지, 그 경험이 어땠는지를 한두 문장으로 나눠 설명하세요. 또한 문장 사이에 쉼표 대신 접속사나 구두점을 사용해 문장을 분리하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My dad bought it for me as a present, and I used to ride it around the neighborhood every weekend.

Gợi ý: 답변이 직접적이지만 구체성이 부족합니다. 이유와 예시를 추가하고 연결어를 사용해 문장을 더 자연스럽게 만드세요. 예: 누구가 주로 타는지, 어떤 상황에서 많이 쓰이는지, 그리고 보관·주차 문제나 단점도 간단히 언급하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many students and office workers ride them to school or work, and they usually park them in racks or storage areas in apartment buildings.

× Yes, I had a bike when I was a child my dad bought for me for a present.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my dad bought it for me as a present.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence lacking proper connectors and contains awkward word order. Combine two independent clauses with a semicolon or a conjunction, and replace the object reference with 'it' to avoid repetition. Use 'as a present' or 'as a gift' for natural phrasing. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yeah, bikes are popular in my country. People usually use it to go to school or work and they park at the apartment.

✓ Yeah, bikes are popular in my country. People usually use them to go to school or work, and they park them at their apartment.

The pronoun 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'bikes'; use 'them'. Also 'park at the apartment' is unidiomatic; use 'park them at their apartment' or 'park them at apartments.' Ensure pronouns agree in number and add possessive 'their' for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:27