Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do have a bike when I was primary school student because I need to, you know, use the bike to go to my school.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
No, bikes are not that popular in China. Uh, maybe in 1990's the bikes are the most popular vehicle, but now I would say the subway and the cars are more convenient than they. So umm, the bikes just become faded.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要时态一致、结构简洁,并补充具体细节以显得自然。避免口语填充词(如 "you know")并控制句子长度不超过五句。可以先用主题句直接回答,然后用一两句具体说明,如什么时候、为什么或与谁一起骑。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was in primary school because it was the easiest way to get to school. I usually rode it with my friends and it took me about ten minutes each way.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更准确并使用连贯的连接词,避免含糊表达和语法错误。可以先给出总体观点,再用具体原因和时间对比支持观点,注意数词和冠词(如 "the 1990s")。保持语言简洁、句子不超过五句。
Ví dụ: I don't think bikes are as popular as they used to be in China. In the 1990s, bicycles were the main mode of transport, but nowadays subways and cars are more convenient. As a result, fewer people rely on bikes for daily commuting.
× Yes, I do have a bike when I was primary school student because I need to, you know, use the bike to go to my school.
✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a primary school student because I needed, you know, to use the bike to go to my school.
问题类型:现在时/过去时时态混用。 原句把“have”用作现在时而时间状语“when I was primary school student(当我上小学时)”表示过去,应使用过去时。另有小的冠词问题:应为“a primary school student”。 建议:把与过去时间相关的动词都改为过去式,注意在“need to”前也要用过去式“needed”。同时在“primary school student”前加不定冠词“a”。
× No, bikes are not that popular in China. Uh, maybe in 1990's the bikes are the most popular vehicle, but now I would say the subway and the cars are more convenient than they.
✓ No, bikes are not that popular in China. Uh, maybe in the 1990s bikes were the most popular vehicles, but now I would say the subway and cars are more convenient than them.
问题类型:主谓一致与代词、数的一致性及时态混用。①“1990's”应写作“the 1990s”。②描述过去的情况应使用过去式“were”而不是现在时“are”。③“the bikes are the most popular vehicle”中主语复数“bikes”与表语单数“vehicle”不一致,应改为复数“vehicles”。④比较对象使用代词时,应使用宾格“them”而不是主格“they”。 建议:注意表示过去时要用过去式;主语与表语在人称数上要一致;比较时代词要用宾格。
× So umm, the bikes just become faded.
✓ So, umm, bikes have just become less popular.
问题类型:现在时态用法不当与用词搭配。原句用“become faded”不自然,且时态不明确。若想表示近年来的变化,用现在完成时更合适“have become”。“faded”通常指颜色褪色,不适合描述受欢迎程度,改为“less popular”。 建议:用现在完成时描述从过去到现在的变化;用合适的词汇表述“变得不那么受欢迎”。