Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is correct but too brief. Give a short topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details (where you rode it, who taught you, or how it felt). Keep it natural and under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven, and I used it to ride to the park every weekend. My older brother taught me to balance it, and I remember feeling very proud when I could ride without training wheels.

Gợi ý: Good idea but your answer is long and slightly repetitive. Start with a clear topic sentence, then use linking words (for example, because, for instance) and give specific examples or reasons (commuting, cost, environment). Vary vocabulary and avoid repeating phrases like “going to”. Keep it within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For example, many students cycle to school and people use bicycles to go to nearby markets or malls. In addition, cycling is seen as an eco-friendly option in crowded cities where parking and traffic are problems.

× Yeah, I think bikes are pretty popular in my country as there are variety of bikes and people use it for their daily use like going to the school or going to the mall or going anywhere if they do not have any other transportations available.

✓ Yeah, I think bikes are pretty popular in my country because there are a variety of bikes and people use them for daily activities like going to school, going to the mall, or going anywhere if they do not have any other transportation available.

Errors involve quantifier and related article use and agreement. 'there are variety of bikes' is missing the article 'a' before 'variety' and should read 'there are a variety of bikes.' 'people use it' is incorrect because 'it' does not agree with the plural noun 'bikes'; use the plural pronoun 'them.' 'their daily use' is awkward; 'daily activities' or 'for their daily commute' is clearer. 'going to the school' and 'going to the mall' are unnatural with definite article when speaking generally; use 'going to school' and 'going to the mall' (mall can take 'the' in many dialects but 'going to school' drops it). 'transportations' is incorrect because 'transportation' is an uncountable noun here, so use singular 'transportation.' To improve: add the article 'a' before 'variety', match pronouns to plural nouns (them), replace 'daily use' with 'daily activities' or 'for daily use', and use uncountable 'transportation.'