Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid contradictions (e.g., saying you had a bike but never used it) without clarifying. Watch grammar (verb tenses and subject agreement) and reduce filler phrases like 'you know'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. However, I rarely used it because I preferred staying at home, so I never learned to ride properly. Consequently, I still don't know how to ride a bike now and I haven't found time to learn.

Gợi ý: Give a clearer reason and use more precise vocabulary and grammar. Start with a direct answer, then add two specific reasons linked with words like 'because' or 'for example'. Correct grammar (e.g., 'cost a lot of money' -> 'cost much money' or 'be expensive'; 'one of my friends prefer' -> 'one of my friends prefers').

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. They are affordable and practical, especially for short trips, so many people choose them over cars. For example, one of my friends prefers cycling home to save money and to get some exercise.

× Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child, but I haven't really used it until now.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child, but I haven't really used it until now.

The student used the auxiliary 'did' with the past simple 'have' which is unnecessary and nonstandard when simply stating possession in the past. Use the past simple 'had' for a simple past fact. Suggestion: say 'I had a bike' rather than 'I did have a bike'.

× I don't know how to ride a bike.

✓ I don't know how to ride a bike.

No grammatical correction needed under the provided list: the sentence correctly uses present simple to state a current ability/knowledge. Keep as is.

× I'm not sure if I will even learn how to do it because I don't really have much time.

✓ I'm not sure if I will even learn how to do it because I don't really have much time.

The sentence correctly uses 'will' to express future uncertainty and present simple to state current lack of time. No correction needed under the listed grammar types.

× And you know, when I was a child, I am not really fond of going out.

✓ And you know, when I was a child, I was not really fond of going out.

The clause 'when I was a child' sets the time in the past, but the student used present 'am'. This is a tense inconsistency. Use past tense 'was' to match the time frame. Suggestion: change present 'am' to past 'was'.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

This sentence is grammatically correct: present simple is appropriate to express a general opinion. No correction needed under the provided list.

× I see them everywhere.

✓ I see them everywhere.

This short sentence is grammatically correct and fits the context. No correction required under the provided grammar types.

× I think it's popular because it doesn't really cause a lot of money and it can also make them healthier.

✓ I think they're popular because they don't cost a lot of money and they can also make people healthier.

Multiple issues: 'it' and 'they' mismatch with plural 'bikes', so pronoun agreement and quantifier/word choice are wrong. 'Doesn't really cause a lot of money' is incorrect English; the verb 'cost' is used with money. Also 'make them healthier' is unclear—use 'people' to refer generally. Suggestion: use plural subject and plural pronouns ('they'), replace 'cause' with 'cost', and use 'people' instead of 'them'.

× For example, one of my friends prefer to ride a bike going home rather than spending a lot of money.

✓ For example, one of my friends prefers to ride a bike to go home rather than spend a lot of money.

With the phrase 'one of my friends' the subject is singular ('one'), so the verb needs singular agreement 'prefers' not 'prefer'. Also, 'ride a bike going home' is awkward; use an infinitive or 'to go home'. 'Rather than spending' can be simplified to parallel infinitive 'rather than spend'. Suggestion: make the verb singular and adjust the verb forms for parallelism and clarity.