Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevap daha doğrudan ve düzenli olmalı. Önce açık bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (örneğin: 'Evet, çocukken bisikletim vardı.'). Ardından kısa destekleyici detay verin (kimin verdiği, neden sevdiğiniz, nerede sürdüğünüz gibi). Gereksiz tekrarları ve dolgu kelimelerini (uh, um) azaltın. Cümleleri basit bağlaçlarla (because, so, and, when) birbirine bağlayın ve maksimum 4-5 cümleyi aşmayın.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents gave it to me for my seventh birthday, and I used to ride it every afternoon in the park. I liked it because it was bright red and very light, so I could ride fast. Riding my bike helped me make friends and stay active.

Gợi ý: Cevap net ve belirgin olmalı: başlangıçta doğrudan görüşünüzü ifade edin, sonra ülkenizdeki durumu özgül örneklerle destekleyin (örneğin bisiklet yolları, bisiklet paylaşım sistemleri, hangi şehirlerde daha yaygın olduğu). Dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin (have → has, bike way → bike lanes) ve bağlaçlarla akışı iyileştirin.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in Azerbaijan, especially in Baku. The city has been expanding its bike lanes and there are public bike-sharing stations near parks and universities. Because of these facilities and increasing environmental awareness, more people choose cycling for short trips.

× Park is the type of transport which we use uh, to go, uh short way and uh, I have a bike when I was a child, I will like a bike because uh, this bike uh, was given uh, by uh.

✓ A park is not a type of transport; we use bikes to travel short distances. I had a bike when I was a child and I liked it because it was given to me.

The original contains multiple sentence structure problems: confused subject and ideas, run-on phrases, and fragments. I split and reordered the ideas into clear sentences, corrected tense consistency (had/liked) and used the correct passive/active form (was given to me). Suggestion: express one main idea per sentence, keep tense consistent, and include necessary prepositions (to me).

× Yes, I think the bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

Using 'the bikes' implies specific bikes; general statements use plural without the definite article. Remove 'the' for a general claim. Also subject-verb agreement is correct but article use affected meaning. Suggestion: use 'bikes are popular' for general statements.

× I live in Azerbaijan and our country have a lot of bike way.

✓ I live in Azerbaijan and our country has a lot of bike lanes.

Subject-verb agreement: 'country' is singular so the verb must be 'has' not 'have'. 'Bike way' is unnatural; use the plural compound noun 'bike lanes'. Suggestion: ensure singular subjects take singular verbs and use standard collocations.

× In the city people use this way and they go to the different place with this way.

✓ In the city people use these lanes and they travel to different places by them.

Incorrect prepositions and demonstratives: 'this way' is vague. Use plural 'these lanes' to match 'people' and 'different places' plural. Use 'by them' or 'by bike' to indicate means of transport. Suggestion: match demonstratives and plurals, and use 'by' + mode of transport or 'by them' for lanes.