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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

No, when I was a child I did not have any bike because my parents were quite strict and they do not and they think that I am not able to ride a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because everyone used their bikes whenever they want to go in very short distances.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 64.0

Gợi ý: Be concise, use correct tense and grammar, and add a brief specific detail to make the answer more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct verb forms, and one supporting detail using a linking word (e.g., because, so).

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my parents were quite strict. For example, they were worried I might fall and get hurt, so they preferred I walk or use public transport for short trips.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Make the statement more natural by correcting tense and word choice, and add a specific example or reason. Use a linking word to connect your opinion and the supporting detail. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips. For instance, students and market vendors often cycle to nearby schools and shops since it is cheaper and faster in traffic.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× No, when I was a child I did not have any bike because my parents were quite strict and they do not and they think that I am not able to ride a bike.

No, when I was a child I did not have a bike because my parents were quite strict and they did not allow me; they thought I was not able to ride a bike.

Errors: inconsistent tense and modal use. The speaker begins in past ('was', 'did not have') but shifts to present ('do not', 'think', 'am not'). Keep past tense for past situations: use 'did not allow' instead of 'do not' and 'thought' instead of 'think'. Also use 'a bike' instead of 'any bike' for a singular countable noun in this context. Suggestion: Keep all verbs describing past circumstances in past tense to avoid tense shifts.

Present tense issue

× Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because everyone used their bikes whenever they want to go in very short distances.

Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because people use their bikes whenever they want to go very short distances.

Errors: mixed tense and subject choice. The clause uses past 'used' with present 'want'; maintain present tense since the question asks about general present facts: use 'use' not 'used'. Also 'everyone used their bikes whenever they want' is awkward: 'people use their bikes whenever they want to go short distances' is more natural. Remove 'in' before 'very short distances' and use plural 'distances'. Suggestion: Keep present simple for habitual/general truths and match subject and verb number.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
ShortConcise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
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