Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer grammatically correct, concise and logically ordered. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and articles, and avoid repetition. For example, mention when you got it, its appearance, and why it was special with a linking word like "because" or "so".

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small yellow bicycle that my father gave me as a reward when I did well at school, so I remember feeling very proud of it.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence, then support it with specific reasons and linkers. Use correct plural forms and formal linking words (because, since, and therefore). Avoid vague phrases like "several" and correct repeated words. Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples such as cost, traffic or short distances.

Ví dụ: Yes, bicycles are very popular in my country because many people cannot afford cars and distances in cities are short. As a result, many commuters and students use bikes for daily travel.

× Yes I do when I was a child earlier on a yellow bike.

✓ Yes, I had a yellow bike when I was a child.

The student mixed present tense 'do' with past-time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' to match the time frame. Also add a comma after 'Yes' and reorder phrase for natural English: 'I had a yellow bike when I was a child.' Suggestion: Use past simple for completed past events (I had, I went, I lived).

× That bike my father gifted me when I succeed in my school.

✓ My father gifted me that bike when I succeeded in school.

The clause contains tense errors: 'gifted' is past simple (correct), but 'succeed' is base form and should be past simple 'succeeded' to agree with 'gifted' and the past time context. Also reorder to natural word order: 'My father gifted me that bike when I succeeded in school.' Suggestion: Ensure all verbs in a past-time sentence are in past simple when describing completed actions. Note: Could also use 'had gifted' only if describing a past-before-past, but simple past is appropriate here.

× Yes, bike is very popular in my country 'cause I see several people rides by a bike, maybe because they can't handle the the cost of cars and the distance.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because I see several people riding bikes, maybe because they can't afford the cost of cars or the long distances.

Multiple errors: 'bike is' should be plural 'bikes are' to refer generally to the item; 'rides' is wrong because subject 'people' requires base verb 'ride' or the -ing form 'riding' when used after 'see'; 'by a bike' is unnatural — use 'riding bikes' or 'on bikes'; 'can't handle the the cost' should be 'can't afford the cost' and remove duplicate 'the'; 'and the distance' is vague — 'or the long distances' is clearer. Corrections align verb forms and plurality and use correct collocations. Suggestion: For general statements use plural nouns and ensure verb agrees with subject; use 'see someone doing something' with the -ing form.