BikePart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes, I had a bike when I was a chat.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, almost all of the people here bike.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Correct the pronunciation/mistake ('chat' → 'child') and make the answer more natural and slightly longer (1–3 sentences). Start with a direct topic sentence, then add a brief supporting detail (when you got it or a memory). Keep under 5 sentences and use linking words if adding details.

Ví dụ: Yes, I did — I had a bike when I was a child. I got it for my seventh birthday and loved riding it to the park every weekend.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Avoid absolute statements and be more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add a reason or example using a linking word (because / for example / as). Use more natural phrasing (e.g., many people, a lot of people). Keep responses concise and accurate.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people use them for short trips and commuting because they are cheap and convenient.

Ngữ pháp

'26:Sentence structure errors'

× 'Yes, I had a bike when I was a chat.'

'Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.'

'chat' is a misspelling and results in a sentence that is semantically and structurally incorrect; the intended noun is 'child'. Replace the incorrect word with the correct noun to match the intended meaning and to fit the past-tense context of the question.' Suggestion: proofread for typos and ensure nouns match context.'

'12:Incorrect use of pronouns'

× 'Yes, almost all of the people here bike.'

'Yes, almost all the people here ride bikes.'

'bike' used as a verb is informal and less natural in this context; additionally the phrase "all of the people" is wordy. Use the noun phrase "ride bikes" to clearly express the action and simplify the determiner to "all the people". This improves naturalness and grammaticality.' Suggestion: use standard verb phrases (ride bikes) and prefer concise determiners.'

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