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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Yes I had. I have a back when I was a kid because my parents wanted me to do more exercise. They thought it good for my health.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think cycling are become popular in my country because it's a good spot for people healthy and it's a good aerobic exercise. It can help people to generate dopamine and release their stress. So many people join.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更自然并注意时态和词汇准确性。首先用完整自然的句子直接回答(例如:Yes, I did.),接着用一到两句补充细节,说明原因或回忆的具体情景。避免拼写或词汇错误(例如把 ‘bike’ 写成 ‘back’),并使用连接词(because / so / as)使句子连贯。可以加上时间或地点细节让内容更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a bicycle when I was about eight years old because my parents wanted me to get more exercise. They thought cycling was good for my health, so they encouraged me to ride to the park every weekend.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 62.0

Gợi ý: 回答要注意语法一致和词汇准确性,使用恰当的连词和限定词使表达更自然。开头先给出明确立场(Yes, I think so.),然后用一到两句具体原因支持你的观点,使用更自然的表达(e.g. good for people’s health, aerobic exercise, relieve stress)。避免直接翻译词汇(如 ‘generate dopamine’ 可改为 ‘boost their mood’),并用少量具体例子或数据增强说服力。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think so. Cycling has become increasingly popular in my country because it’s a convenient and affordable way to stay fit. Many people use bikes for commuting or weekend exercise, which helps improve their mood and reduce stress.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Yes I had.

Yes, I did.

原句中使用“I had”沒有明確賓語,且口語回答過去式問句時常用助動詞“did”作簡短回答。應使用“Yes, I did.” 或 “Yes, I had a bike.” 來完整表達。建議回答時用“Yes, I did.” 作一般過去簡短肯定,或完整句子補上賓語。

Sentence structure errors

× I have a back when I was a kid because my parents wanted me to do more exercise.

I had a bike when I was a kid because my parents wanted me to get more exercise.

原句有多處錯誤:‘I have a back’ 是拼寫與詞彙錯誤,應為 ‘bike’(自行车);時態應與從句保持一致,用過去式 ‘had’;片語 ‘do more exercise’ 在此語境更自然為 ‘get more exercise’。因此改為‘I had a bike when I was a kid because my parents wanted me to get more exercise.’。建議注意單詞拼寫、時態一致和搭配用法。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× They thought it good for my health.

They thought it was good for my health.

此句缺少連繫動詞 ‘was’(系動詞)來連接主詞與補語。正確結構為 ‘thought it was good’。建議在表達看法時使用完整從句 ‘they thought that it was…’ 或簡化為 ‘they thought it was…’。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I think cycling are become popular in my country because it's a good spot for people healthy and it's a good aerobic exercise.

Yes, I think cycling has become popular in my country because it's good for people's health and it's a good aerobic exercise.

原句錯誤包括:‘cycling are become’ 主謂不一致且動詞形式錯誤,應用現在完成時 ‘has become’;‘a good spot for people healthy’ 搭配和詞序錯誤,應為 ‘good for people's health’。因此把句子改為 ‘cycling has become popular…’ 並改正短語為 ‘good for people's health’。建議注意主語與動詞的一致、正確時態以及固定搭配(good for someone's health)。

Verb in the present participle form

× It can help people to generate dopamine and release their stress.

It can help people generate dopamine and relieve their stress.

動詞搭配問題:英文中常說 ‘help someone (to) do sth’,此處可省略 to,故用 ‘help people generate’ 更自然;‘release their stress’ 用法不太地道,應用 ‘relieve their stress’ 或 ‘reduce their stress’。因此改為 ‘help people generate dopamine and relieve their stress.’ 建議學習常用動詞搭配和固定短語(collocations)。

Sentence structure errors

× So many people join.

So many people take up cycling.

原句 ‘So many people join.’ 結構不完整,缺少賓語或說明加入什麼。應補全為 ‘take up cycling’ 或 ‘join in cycling activities’。此處用 ‘take up cycling’ 更自然。建議在使用動詞 ‘join’ 時指明所加入的活動或團體,或改用合適短語。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

BackRear; Reverse; Backward
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HealthyWell; Health-giving
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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