Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence using past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words and correct verb forms. For example, say who gave the bike, how old you were, and a brief memory. Keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to the park every weekend. It was bright red and had a bell, so I remember feeling very proud of it.

Gợi ý: Make the sentence natural and grammatically correct, avoid repetition, and add specific reasons or examples. Begin with a clear opinion, then support it with two concise and connected reasons using linking words like 'because' or 'because of' and include a short example or consequence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are very popular in my country because they are affordable and convenient for short trips. For instance, many people use bikes to commute to work or go to the market, especially in crowded cities where traffic is heavy.

× Yes, I have a bike when I am child my father forget it for me.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child; my father bought it for me.

Problems: incorrect tense and form: 'have' and 'am' should be past tense ('had', 'was') because the question asks about childhood (past). 'child' needs the article 'a' after 'was'. 'forget' is wrong: intended meaning is that the father obtained the bike, so use 'bought' (past tense). Also sentence needs punctuation or conjunction to separate clauses. Suggestion: Use past simple for past events ('had', 'was', 'bought') and add proper articles and punctuation. Grammar problem type ID:6

× Yes, I think bike is most popular in my country because because of most of people use it and this this is not not a high price product.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because most people use them and they are not expensive.

Problems: 'bike' should be plural 'bikes' when speaking generally; use 'are' for plural (subject-verb agreement). The phrase 'most of people' is incorrect; use 'most people'. Pronouns: 'it' should be 'them' to match plural 'bikes'. 'this is not not a high price product' is ungrammatical and wordy; simplify to 'they are not expensive'. Remove repeated words. Suggestion: Use plural nouns and matching verbs/pronouns, avoid unnecessary literal translations like 'high price product' and use natural adjectives like 'expensive'. Grammar problem type ID:1