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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Honestly, no, because when I try to ride a bike when I was eight I was pretty frightened about the idea to lose my balance and so I never tried again.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, people who don't own a car often prefer cycle instead of taking a public transport that are not very frequent, especially in my city.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Migliora la grammatica dei tempi verbali, rendi la risposta più naturale e più concisa; usa una frase tematica chiara e poi una breve spiegazione con connettore. Ad esempio, correggi i tempi (uso del past simple), evita ripetizioni e scegli vocaboli più appropriati come "learn to ride" e "lost my balance".

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t. When I was eight I tried to learn to ride a bike but I lost my balance and got frightened, so I never tried again.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: Rendi la risposta più naturale e grammaticalmente corretta; usa una frase tematica seguita da dettagli concreti e connettori. Correggi errori come "prefer cycle" -> "prefer cycling" o "prefer to cycle", e "public transport that are" -> "public transport, which is". Aggiungi un esempio specifico o confronto per arricchire la risposta.

Ví dụ: Yes, cycling is quite common. Many people who don’t own cars prefer to cycle rather than use public transport, which can be infrequent in my city, especially during evenings.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× Honestly, no, because when I try to ride a bike when I was eight I was pretty frightened about the idea to lose my balance and so I never tried again.

Honestly, no, because when I tried to ride a bike when I was eight I was pretty frightened about the idea of losing my balance, so I never tried again.

The sentence mixes present tense 'try' with past time 'when I was eight'. Use past tense 'tried'. Also use correct verb pattern after 'the idea' — 'of losing' (preposition + gerund). Remove the redundant 'and' before 'so' to improve flow. Suggestion: Maintain consistent past tense for events in the past and use 'the idea of' + verb-ing for expressing concern about an action.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Yes, people who don't own a car often prefer cycle instead of taking a public transport that are not very frequent, especially in my city.

Yes, people who don't own a car often prefer cycling instead of taking public transport, which is not very frequent, especially in my city.

Use 'cycling' (verb-ing) or 'bicycles' rather than 'cycle' alone. 'Public transport' is an uncountable noun so it should not have 'a' or be pluralized with 'are'; use 'which is' to refer to 'public transport' (singular concept). Replace 'that are' with 'which is' and keep agreement. Suggestion: Use 'prefer cycling' or 'prefer bicycles' and 'public transport' without an article; ensure verb agreement with the noun phrase.

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