Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. "Yes, I had a bike when I was a child."), then give 1–2 specific supporting details (age you got it, who gave it to you, how often you used it). Use linking words (e.g. "when", "so", "because") and avoid contradictions or irrelevant statements. Keep answers under five sentences and use correct tense and simple vocabulary (e.g. "had", "learned") to improve clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it almost every day after school. Because I took lessons from a local coach, I learned to ride safely and became confident on the road.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give clear, specific reasons: state your opinion first (e.g. "Yes, I think bikes are moderately popular."), then support it with 1–2 concrete points (urban use, bike lanes, safety concerns). Use linking words like "because", "however", or "for example" to organise ideas, and avoid hesitation words like "actually" or fragmented sentences. Keep it to under five sentences and use correct vocabulary ("dangerous" not repeated fragments).

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bicycles are fairly popular in my country. For example, many people use bikes for short trips in cities because there are dedicated bike lanes in some areas. However, they are less common on major roads because traffic can be dangerous for cyclists.

× Yes, I do really have a bike when I was young and I used to have a little cash.

✓ Yes, I really had a bike when I was young and I used to have a little cart.

The sentence mixes present tense 'do really have' with past time 'when I was young.' Use past tense 'had.' Also 'little cash' is awkward; likely meant 'little cart' or 'small bike'—I corrected to 'little cart' assuming student meant an accessory. To improve, keep verb tense consistent with time markers (use past tense for past events) and choose the correct noun for intended meaning.

× Alright, so I'm really busy. I can't, so my parents really need ones.

✓ Alright, I was really busy, so my parents needed one.

The original uses present tense 'I'm' and modal 'can't' incorrectly for a past context and the pronoun 'ones' is vague and mismatched. Change to past tense 'was' and 'needed one' to match singular noun. To improve, ensure pronouns agree in number with the noun and tenses match the time frame.

× My parents send me to a bike a bicycle lessons to learn how to ride a bike bicycle.

✓ My parents sent me to bicycle lessons to learn how to ride a bike.

The sentence has redundant words ('a bike a bicycle', 'bike bicycle') and wrong tense 'send' instead of past 'sent.' Simplify to 'bicycle lessons' and use past tense for past events. For improvement, remove repetition and ensure verb tense matches the time referenced.

× Actually, I'm not sure about that, but from my perspective I think it's quite yes.

✓ Actually, I wasn't sure about that, but from my perspective I thought they were quite popular.

The response mixes present 'I'm' with uncertain phrasing 'quite yes' which is ungrammatical. Because question asked generally about popularity (present) the student could use present tense 'I'm not sure... I think they are quite popular.' I changed to past to be consistent with previous past context; alternatively use present: 'I'm not sure... I think they are quite popular.' Improve by using 'popular' as the adjective and proper structure 'I think they are...'.

× Consider some roles in that are specific for bike and bicycles and but that are not really common in major roads since it is too or in or at high roads in this really dangerous.

✓ There are some places designated for bikes that are not common on major roads because riding on highways is very dangerous.

The original sentence has unclear word choice ('roles' instead of 'places' or 'lanes'), redundant words, incorrect prepositions ('in or at high roads'), and awkward modifiers. I rewrote it to clearly express the idea: designated bike lanes are uncommon on major roads and highways are dangerous. To improve, choose precise nouns, use correct prepositions ('on major roads', 'on highways'), and avoid redundant fillers.