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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, I had a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

I think so. My country is popular.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答は簡潔だが発展性が乏しく、自然さと具体性が不足しています。トピック文(はい/いいえ)に続けて、短い理由や具体的な思い出を付け加えると良いです。例:いつ頃乗り始めたか、誰からもらったか、どのように使っていたか、特に印象に残っている出来事などを一つか二つ述べてください。接続詞(for example, because, so)を使って文をつなげる練習をしましょう。発音と文法は単純なので明瞭ですが、語彙を少し増やし、文の長さを2〜3文にすると自然に聞こえます。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven because my parents wanted me to exercise more. For example, I used to ride to the local park every afternoon and learned to ride without training wheels in one week.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 答えがあいまいで文法的に不自然です。まずは明確な意見を短いトピック文で述べ、その後に理由や具体例を付け加えて説明してください。例えば、どのような場所や年齢層で人気があるか、通勤手段として使われているか、最近のトレンドやインフラ(自転車道、レンタルサービス)について触れると良いでしょう。接続詞(because, for example, especially)を使って論理的につなげ、単語の選択も文脈に合ったものにしましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes. For example, students often cycle to school and several cities have bike-sharing programs and dedicated bike lanes, which makes cycling convenient.

Ngữ pháp

3:There be issue

× I think so. My country is popular.

I think so. Bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence 'My country is popular' is incorrect in meaning and structure for the question about bikes. The examiner asked about the popularity of bikes, so the subject should be 'bikes' and the verb 'are' expresses existence/state (there be/subject-verb structure). Change to 'Bikes are popular in my country' to correctly state that bicycles, not the country, are popular. Suggestion: make sure the subject matches the topic of the question and use 'be' to describe general states.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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