Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct tense errors and avoid filler sounds like "uh." For example, state when you had the bike, who gave it to you, and one specific memory or reason you liked it.

Ví dụ: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. My mother bought it for me as a birthday present, and it was almost brand new. Because it had a comfortable seat and strong brakes, I used it to ride to school and explore the neighborhood every day.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and an example, using linking words for coherence. Fix word order and collocations (e.g., "popular in my country," "replace walking"). Avoid vague phrases and finish your thought.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in China. For example, many people cycle for exercise and sightseeing, and electric bikes are commonly used for short commutes. As a result, cycling often replaces walking or short car trips, especially in busy urban areas.

× Yes, I have a bike when I I had a bike when I was a child and uh, the bike is quite new. My mom bought it for me. I liked it very much, but it was.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. The bike was quite new; my mom bought it for me. I liked it very much.

The student mixes present and past tense in the same sentence. The question asks about the past ('when you were a child'), so all verbs describing that time should be in the past tense. Change 'I have a bike' to 'I had a bike' and 'the bike is quite new' to 'the bike was quite new'. Also remove duplicated words ('I I') and the unfinished clause 'but it was.' Use coherent past-tense sequencing to improve clarity. Suggestions: keep all time references to the past consistent, remove repeated words, and complete clauses.

× Bikes are they PO popular in China because so many citizens use bikes to exercise and to tour around the city.

✓ Bikes are very popular in China because many people use them to exercise and to tour around the city.

The original sentence has disordered words ('are they PO popular') and awkward noun choice ('citizens' is formal). Fix word order and choose natural vocabulary: 'very popular' and 'many people'. Also replace 'use bikes' with the pronoun 'them' to avoid repetition. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'Bikes are' is correct. Suggestions: arrange words in standard subject-verb-adjective order, use natural collocations, and avoid unnecessary repetitions.

× It can replace walk simply and also.

✓ They can replace walking for short trips and sightseeing.

The original uses incorrect verb forms and missing prepositions: 'replace walk' is incorrect because 'replace' should take a noun or gerund ('walking'). 'Simply and also' is unclear. Use 'for' to indicate purpose ('for short trips and sightseeing') and change 'It' to 'They' to match plural 'bikes'. Use 'walking' (gerund) as the object of 'replace'. Suggestions: use gerunds after verbs like 'replace', match pronouns to plural nouns, and use clear phrases for purpose.