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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

Now, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

No, I don't think the bikes are popular in my country because nowadays people drive to school or the office.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要直接且自然。此答案时态有误(现在用“Now”且与过去时冲突),句子重复且过短。改进建议:1) 开头用直接的主题句,明确使用过去时,例如“I didn’t have a bike when I was a child.” 2) 如有必要,补充一两句具体细节(原因或替代交通工具),并使用连接词如“because”或“so”使内容连贯。3) 避免不必要的词(例如“Now”),保持语句简洁自然。

Ví dụ: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child because my family lived in a city where public transport was more convenient. So I usually walked to school or took the bus instead.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较直接但可以更自然、更具体。改进建议:1) 避免绝对化的开头(例如直接说“No”),可以用更自然的短句如“I don’t think so”或“Not really.” 2) 提供更具体的细节或对比(例如城市与乡村差异、数据或个人观察),并使用连接词如“because”或“however”来组织信息。3) 控制长度在两到三句内,保持流畅与逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Not really. I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country, especially in big cities, because most people prefer to drive or take public transport. However, cycling is becoming more common in some neighborhoods where there are bike lanes.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× Now, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

句子使用的是一般过去时(过去有或没有的事实),不需要在句首加“Now”。“Now”表示现在,与句中过去时“didn't have”冲突,造成时态混用。建议去掉“Now”,直接使用“I didn't have a bike when I was a child.”来表达“我小时候没有自行车”。

Incorrect use of the definite article

× No, I don't think the bikes are popular in my country because nowadays people drive to school or the office.

No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country because nowadays people drive to school or to the office.

原句中使用了定冠词“the bikes”暗示特指某些自行车,但说的是一般情况,应使用不定或零冠词“bikes”。另外,为了并列短语的平行性,最好在“to school or to the office”中在第二个并列项也加上介词“to”。中文建议:将“the bikes”改为“bikes”,并在并列的地点前保持介词一致,写成“drive to school or to the office”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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