Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Good direct response with clear topic sentence and supporting details. To improve, tighten phrasing to avoid small redundancies and hesitations, and vary vocabulary slightly. Keep responses within 3–4 concise sentences and add a brief specific detail (e.g., where the park was or a memorable incident) using a linking word to show sequence or reason.

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike as a child. My father taught me to ride when I was about five, and I would cycle to the neighborhood park every afternoon to play with my friends. Because the park was close to home, I felt confident riding on my own after a few weeks.

Gợi ý: The answer addresses the question but contains hesitations, repetition, and unclear reasons. Improve by removing filler words (um, I’d), correcting repetition, and giving one clear, specific reason supported by an example. Use linking words (however, because, for example) to make the argument coherent and limit to 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are fairly popular, although motorcycles are more common. However, many people cycle for short trips within cities because bike lanes are improving and riding is cheaper. For example, bike couriers are widely used for quick deliveries in downtown areas.

× I used to ride it going to the park to meet up and play with my friends.

✓ I used to ride it to the park to meet up and play with my friends.

The phrase 'ride it going to the park' is ungrammatical because 'going' creates a misplaced or unnecessary gerund. Use the infinitive phrase 'to the park' after 'ride' to indicate destination. Suggestion: say 'ride it to the park' or 'ride it while going to the park' if emphasizing simultaneous action.

× I I'd imagine it's because of the many flyovers along the road and umm, tunnels along major highways in the city, though many people still use the bike.

✓ I'd imagine it's because of the many flyovers and tunnels along the major highways in the city, though many people still use bikes.

Problems: 'I I'd' is a repetition/typo; remove extra 'I'. 'the many flyovers along the road and umm, tunnels along major highways' is wordy and inconsistent article use. Also 'use the bike' sounds like a specific bike; plural 'bikes' fits general statement. Suggestion: remove repetition, streamline phrase order, and use plural when speaking generally about people using bicycles.

× We also have bike deliveries.

✓ We also have bike deliveries.

Sentence is acceptable but could be improved by adding an article for clarity: 'We also have bike deliveries' is grammatically correct as a noun phrase; alternatively 'We also have bicycle delivery services' is clearer. No mandatory article error, so leave as is.