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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

I had a bike when I was a child but I don't like riding it much because I was a bit scared of falling so I usually walked all bent with my parents inside.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Oh yes, I could see a lot of bags when I go to school.

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接、结构更清晰,并使用连贯词来组织细节。例如先用主题句直接回答,然后给出原因和具体例子。避免句子冗长或不自然的短语(如“walked all bent with my parents inside”不清楚)。可以加入具体年龄或频率来丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about eight, but I rarely rode it because I was afraid of falling. For example, I only rode it once or twice a week while my parents usually walked beside me. Over time I preferred walking because it felt safer.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答与题意不匹配且内容不具体。先直接回答“是否流行”,然后给出具体理由和例子(例如城市骑行者多、通勤、运动或租赁单车普及),并使用连词使逻辑连贯。避免与问题无关的名词或模糊描述。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. Many people use them for short commutes and shopping, especially in cities where bike lanes are common. For instance, I see dozens of students and office workers cycling to school or work every morning.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× I had a bike when I was a child but I don't like riding it much because I was a bit scared of falling so I usually walked all bent with my parents inside.

I had a bike when I was a child, but I didn't like riding it much because I was a bit scared of falling, so I usually walked along with my parents instead.

错误类型:过去时态问题(ID 5)。原句在叙述过去经历时时态不一致:开头使用过去时“I had”和“I was a child”,但中间用现在时“don't like riding it much”,应改为过去时“didn't like”。另外短语 "walked all bent with my parents inside" 不符合英语表达习惯:1) “walked all bent” 不自然,改为“walked along”或“walked”更合适;2) “with my parents inside” 意义不清,推测为“和父母在一起”,应使用“with my parents”或“along with my parents”;整体句子需添加逗号分隔分句并用“instead”表明替代行为。建议:描述过去经历时,保持全句过去时;使用常见搭配如 “didn't like riding” 和 “walked along with my parents”。

Present tense issue

× Oh yes, I could see a lot of bags when I go to school.

Oh yes, I can see a lot of bikes when I go to school.

错误类型:现在时态问题(ID 6)和词汇错误导致语义不符。原句“I could see a lot of bags when I go to school.” 时态上混用“could”(过去可能/能力)与“When I go to school”(一般现在时),且语义上说“bags” 与上下文问题(询问自行车是否受欢迎)不匹配。应使用一般现在时表达常规事实:“I can see a lot of bikes when I go to school.” 若想用过去时则应一致为“could see … when I went to school”。建议:描述习惯性或常规现象用一般现在时(can see … when I go),注意词汇与上下文一致(bikes 而非 bags)。

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