Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Definitely it's my dad before me.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I don't think so because there are so many cars in every family.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 问题:Did you have a bike when you were a child? 建议(简体中文):你的回答不够清晰、语法有误且太简短。首先要直接回答问题并用一到两句补充具体细节,例如谁的自行车、什么时候开始使用、骑车的频率或一次难忘的经历。回答时注意主语和时态一致,避免模糊表达,比如“it's my dad before me”应改为清晰的过去式描述。可以使用连接词如“so”或“because”来衔接句子,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It actually belonged to my dad at first, but he let me use it when I was about seven, so I rode it to visit friends almost every weekend.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 问题:Do you think bikes are popular in your country? 建议(简体中文):你的观点明确但过于笼统,缺少具体细节和支持理由。回答时应先给出直接观点,然后用一到两句具体原因或证据支持,比如城市与乡村的差别、通勤方式、基础设施(如自行车道)或统计类描述。使用连接词(because, however, although)增强逻辑性,避免绝对化表述如“every family”。
Ví dụ: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most families own cars and many cities lack safe bike lanes. However, in some rural areas and university towns cycling is still quite common for short trips.
× Definitely it's my dad before me.
✓ Definitely it was my dad before me.
原句中时态不一致。提问是过去时(Did you have... when you were a child?),回答也应使用过去时。原句使用現在時態的 it’s(it is)与句子背景不符,應改為過去時的 it was。建議:回應過去事件時使用過去式(was/were/did):例如 “It was my dad.” 或 “Definitely, my dad did.”
× I don't think so because there are so many cars in every family.
✓ I don't think so because there are so many cars in each family.
原句使用 every family 與語義略不契合,通常用 each family 或 in most families 更自然。此處時態(現在時)與問句一致,主要問題是介系詞搭配與限定詞選擇。建議:用 each family 或 most families 表達“一家家都有很多車”的概念;例如 “there are so many cars in most families.”