Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes, I heard back when I was in primary school and I used it to go to school every day.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
I think it was very popular about 20 years ago. At that time every adult Chinese use it to for commuter. But nowadays almost every family has a car, so people.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接且自然。你的回答开头回答了问题,但有语法错误(“I heard” 应为 “I had”),并且句子不够精确。可以给出一到两句补充细节(例如你骑车多远、是否喜欢或有特别回忆),并用连接词让叙述更连贯。注意控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was in primary school. I used it to ride to school every day because the school was about 10 minutes away from my house. Also, I remember enjoying racing with my friends on weekends, which made cycling a fun part of my childhood.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答需要时态一致、语法正确并补充完整的观点。目前存在时态和语法错误(例如“use it to for commuter”),句子未完成。先给出明确的主题句,再用1–2句具体支持(原因、变化、具体例子),并使用连接词(e.g., however, nowadays)。保持简洁且完整。
Ví dụ: Bikes used to be very popular in my country about 20 years ago. At that time many adults relied on bicycles as their main way of commuting. However, nowadays most families own cars, so cycling has become less common in cities, although it remains popular for leisure and exercise.
× Yes, I heard back when I was in primary school and I used it to go to school every day.
✓ Yes, I had one back when I was in primary school and I used it to go to school every day.
问题类型:过去时问题(Past tense issue)。 解释:原句中使用了动词 "heard"(听见),与语境不符。题目在问“有没有自行车”,应使用表示“拥有”的过去时态动词,如 "had"。另外,短语应为 "have/had a bike" 而不是 "heard"。建议在表达过去拥有某物时使用 "had",并保持句子其他部分的过去时一致。
× I think it was very popular about 20 years ago.
✓ I think it was very popular about 20 years ago.
问题类型:现在时问题(Present tense issue)。 解释:此句本身时态使用正确(主句用现在时表达观点,时间状语指出过去),不需要改动。此处仅确认为正确用法:用现在时的 "I think" 表达现在的看法,同时用过去时 "was" 指过去的流行程度。无需修改。
× At that time every adult Chinese use it to for commuter.
✓ At that time every adult Chinese used it for commuting.
问题类型:主谓一致/动词时态及用法(Subject-verb agreement errors / Past tense issue)。 解释:原句有几个错误: 1) 主谓一致与时态:主语 "every adult Chinese" 是单数概念(every + 单数),动词应使用单数过去式或第三人称单数形式。因为时间为过去,动词应为过去式 "used" 而不是 "use"。 2) 介词和短语搭配错误:短语 "use it to for commuter" 混用了不定式和介词,且 "commuter" 是名词,错误。正确表达为 "use it for commuting" 或 "use it to commute"。 建议:将动词改为过去式 "used",并把目的表达改为 "for commuting" 或 "to commute"。例如:"At that time every adult Chinese used it for commuting."。
× But nowadays almost every family has a car, so people.
✓ But nowadays almost every family has a car, so people don't use bikes as much.
问题类型:句子结构错误(Sentence structure errors)。 解释:原句以 "so people." 结尾,句子残缺,缺少谓语部分,导致意思不完整。需要补充完整的结论性从句以说明因果关系。建议补全为 "so people don't use bikes as much" 或 "so people prefer cars" 等,明确说明现在人们的行为变化。