Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the response more concise, correct grammar and reduce repetition. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct errors (e.g., "on my 5th birthday," "a pink bike," avoid repeating "birthday" and "with it").

Ví dụ: Yes. I got a bike for my 5th birthday from my parents. It was a small pink bike, and I loved riding it around the neighborhood; because of that I have many fond childhood memories even now.

Gợi ý: Organize the answer with a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons, using linking words and fixing grammar. Avoid repetition and vague phrases. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., "affordable" instead of "reasonable," "transport" instead of "transportations").

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country for two main reasons. First, they are much more affordable than cars, so many low-income families choose them; second, they are convenient for short trips and appealing to people who enjoy outdoor activities.

× Yes, I remember it was my 5th birthday when my dad and my mom purchased me a little bike on my birthday.

✓ Yes, I remember it was my fifth birthday when my dad and my mom purchased a little bike for me.

Article and wording: '5th' should be written as 'fifth' in formal writing; 'purchased me a little bike on my birthday' is unidiomatic — use 'purchased a little bike for me' to show the recipient. Also avoid repeating 'birthday'. Suggestion: use 'fifth' and 'purchased a little bike for me'.

× It was pink colour bike and I really enjoyed playing with it with it throughout my childhood.

✓ It was a pink bike, and I really enjoyed playing with it throughout my childhood.

Adjective order and article: use 'a pink bike' not 'pink colour bike'. Also there is a duplicated phrase 'with it with it'. Fix by removing duplicate and adding comma before coordinating conjunction. Suggestion: use 'a pink bike' and remove duplicate 'with it'.

× I have great memories regarding that even till today.

✓ I still have great memories of it today.

Awkward structure and word choice: 'regarding that even till today' is unnatural. Use 'I still have great memories of it today' to convey continuity. Suggestion: reorder to 'I still have great memories of it today'.

× Bikes are really popular form of transportation in my country.

✓ Bikes are a really popular form of transportation in my country.

Missing article: 'popular form' needs an article 'a' to be grammatically correct. Suggestion: insert 'a' before 'really' or 'popular'.

× It is the first reason it is is that it is very reasonable as compared to other transportations like cars, the people who can't afford it, mostly the underprivileged as well as it's good for those who enjoy adventures even I think of.

✓ The main reason is that bicycles are very affordable compared to other vehicles like cars; people who cannot afford cars, mostly the underprivileged, use them, and they are also good for people who enjoy adventure.

Multiple issues: repetition ('it is the first reason it is is'), incorrect word choice ('reasonable' -> 'affordable'), wrong plural/uncountable nouns ('transportations' -> 'vehicles'), punctuation and run-on sentence. Pronoun reference unclear ('it' ambiguous). Suggestion: restructure into clear clauses, replace 'reasonable' with 'affordable', use 'vehicles' or 'cars', and break into shorter sentences for clarity.