Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more accurate with vocabulary and sentence structure. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Avoid repeated or mixed words (e.g., 'bite' vs 'bike', 'spill' unclear). Keep responses concise (max 4–5 sentences).

Ví dụ: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was bright red and felt very large to me because I was quite small then. My father gave it to me for my eighth birthday, and I practiced riding it every day until I could balance without training wheels.

Gợi ý: Give a direct opinion first, then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Use precise vocabulary (e.g., 'fuel prices' instead of 'oil gases') and avoid fillers like 'you know'. One or two supporting points are enough; include a brief example or consequence to strengthen your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. Because fuel prices have risen recently, many people prefer bicycles and scooters for short trips to save money. For example, students and office workers often cycle to nearby shops or stations to avoid traffic and high parking costs.

× I did have a bite back when I was a child and I still remember that bite or spill in colour and also big for me as I was still short at that time and I remember that my father bought it for me for my birthday.

✓ I did have a bike when I was a child, and I still remember that bike vividly; it seemed very big to me because I was small then, and I remember that my father bought it for my birthday.

Multiple issues: misused word 'bite' should be 'bike' (word choice), awkward phrasing and tense/verb form issues. Use 'did have' is acceptable for emphasis but simpler 'I had a bike' is natural; however keeping 'did have' is fine. 'Spill in colour' is incorrect — intended 'vividly' or 'in full colour'. 'Big for me as I was still short at that time' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'it seemed very big to me because I was small then' for clarity and correct adjective/adverb placement. The clause 'my father bought it for me for my birthday' is correct in tense (past simple) so retained with minor punctuation changes for fluency. Suggestion: choose correct vocabulary (bike), simplify sentences, use clearer adverbial phrases such as 'vividly' or 'in full colour', and maintain consistent past tense narrative.

× I do agree with this with that statement because in this era, you know, the price of oil gases used is increased over time, so people would choose something other than motorcycle, other than cars for them to go somewhere.

✓ I agree with that statement because nowadays the price of fuel has increased over time, so people choose alternatives to motorcycles and cars to get around.

Problems: redundant 'do agree with this with that statement' — use 'agree with that statement'. 'In this era' is awkward; 'nowadays' fits better. 'Oil gases used' is incorrect noun phrase; correct is 'fuel' or 'petrol'/'gasoline'. 'Is increased over time' uses incorrect passive/present form; correct is 'has increased over time' (present perfect to indicate change up to now). 'People would choose something other than motorcycle, other than cars for them to go somewhere' has several issues: unnecessary conditional 'would', incorrect singular/plural and article use. Correct to 'people choose alternatives to motorcycles and cars to get around.' Suggestions: use correct nouns for fuel, use present perfect for changes over time, avoid redundant words, ensure plural forms and articles are correct, and use natural verbs like 'get around' or 'travel'.