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Part 1

Giám khảo

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Thí sinh

When I was a child, I don't have a bike.

Giám khảo

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Thí sinh

Yes, bikes are popular in the Philippines. Many of many of the people in the Philippines are athletic. So yeah, there are many bikers in the Philippines.

Đánh giá

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Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: Correct the tense and make the answer more natural and slightly longer (1–3 sentences). Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question directly, then give a brief reason or detail. Use past tense: “I didn’t have a bike” or “I didn’t own a bike.” For example, mention who you borrowed bikes from or why you didn’t have one (cost, family situation). Avoid repeating words and keep it concise.

Ví dụ: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one, so I usually borrowed bikes from my neighbors or rode a tricycle to school.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Make the response more fluent and avoid repetition. Begin with a direct answer, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because, so, and). Provide a concrete example or context (commuting, sport, weekend groups) to strengthen your answer and vary vocabulary (cyclists, cycling).

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in the Philippines because many people enjoy cycling for exercise and short commutes. For example, weekend cycling groups often ride along coastal roads, and city markets are sometimes filled with cyclists commuting to work.

Ngữ pháp

Present tense issue

× When I was a child, I don't have a bike.

When I was a child, I didn't have a bike.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child') so the verb must be in the past tense. The original uses the present tense with do/n't. Use the past simple negative 'didn't have' to match the past time reference. Suggestion: use past simple for actions or states in the past (I didn't have).

Singular and plural issue

× Yes, bikes are popular in the Philippines. Many of many of the people in the Philippines are athletic.

Yes, bikes are popular in the Philippines. Many of the people in the Philippines are athletic.

The phrase 'many of many of the people' repeats and is ungrammatical. Use 'many of the people' or simply 'many people'. Also 'the' before 'people' is optional depending on meaning; 'many people in the Philippines are athletic' is more natural. Suggestion: remove the repeated words and choose either 'many people' or 'many of the people'.

Singular and plural issue

× So yeah, there are many bikers in the Philippines.

So yeah, there are many bikers in the Philippines.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It correctly uses plural 'bikers' with 'are'. No change needed. Included for completeness.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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