Bike— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two clear supporting details. Use correct grammar (e.g. "it was red" not "a red color"), fix awkward phrases ("to have fan" is unclear), and avoid repetition ("I did have" → "I had"). Keep answers within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like "so" or "after that" to show sequence.

Ví dụ: I had a bike when I was a child. When I was about three, my parents bought me a red tricycle with stickers because I begged them for one. After practicing on that, I learned to balance and eventually moved on to a two-wheeled bicycle.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity, grammar and organization. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific reasons with linking words (e.g. "because," "for example"). Correct subject-verb agreement ("they're much average people" → "many people are of average income"). Avoid vague or incomplete endings; finish your thought. Use vocabulary relevant to transport and economy.

Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Many people prefer bicycles because they are inexpensive and convenient for short trips. For example, commuters often use bikes to avoid traffic and parents let young children ride bikes in parks and on quiet streets.

× It was a red color and there were some kid decorations to have fan.

✓ It was red and had some child-friendly decorations to be fun.

The phrase 'a red color' is redundant; use 'red' as an adjective for the noun. 'There were some kid decorations to have fan' contains incorrect plural/word choice and awkward infinitive. 'Kid' as adjective is informal; 'child-friendly' is better. Also 'to have fun' not 'to have fan'. Adjusted structure to 'had some child-friendly decorations to be fun' to make it grammatical and natural.

× It was really great and from that on I learned how to ride a bike that.

✓ It was really great, and from then on I learned how to ride a bike.

The phrase 'from that on' is incorrect; use 'from then on'. The trailing 'that' is unnecessary and ungrammatical. Also added a comma and adjusted word order for clarity. 'Learned' is correct past tense, so only phrase correction was needed.

× Well, yes, it is very popular in my country because my country is not the rich and they're much average people living there.

✓ Well, yes, bikes are very popular in my country because the country is not rich and there are many average-income people living there.

The student used 'it is' to refer to 'bikes' (plural), causing a number mismatch; use 'bikes are'. 'My country is not the rich' is ungrammatical; use 'the country is not rich'. 'They're much average people' is incorrect; use 'there are many average-income people' to convey the intended meaning. Corrected subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× So most people will prefer to ride a bike than riding other big vehicles such as motorbike and cars.

✓ So most people prefer riding a bike to riding larger vehicles such as motorbikes and cars.

The pattern 'prefer A to B' or 'prefer doing A to doing B' is correct; 'prefer to ride... than riding' is incorrect. Use consistent verb forms: 'prefer riding... to riding...'. Also pluralized 'motorbike' to 'motorbikes' and changed 'big' to 'larger' for clarity. Removed unnecessary modal 'will' because general preference uses simple present.

× And also here's day-to-day kids, uh, ride bike for.

✓ Also, nowadays kids ride bikes every day.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical: 'here's day-to-day kids' is incorrect structure and 'ride bike for' is incomplete. Rewritten to 'nowadays kids ride bikes every day' to express habitual action clearly and correctly. Adjusted word order and added plural 'bikes'.