Part 1
Giám khảo
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Thí sinh
Yes I did, I have a bike when I was a child to practice the balance.
Giám khảo
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think a bike is very popular in my country and the people usually uh borrow the bike public by to Tran trans to in order to transit uh. It is very convenient and uh.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 用更自然和时态一致的表达,并补充简短细节。注意时态应该是过去式,句子不要太长或重复。可以先直接回答,然后用一两句话解释原因或描述一两点具体细节,例如谁送的、什么时候学会的或在哪里骑的。
Ví dụ: Yes, I did. I had a small red bike when I was about seven, and I used it to learn how to balance and ride around my neighborhood. It helped me become more confident and active.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答要更清晰、有条理,避免口头语和重复式停顿。先给出直接回答,再用一到两句具体说明原因或举例。使用衔接词(for example, because, so)来使表达连贯,并提供具体细节,比如共享单车、通勤或城市特点。
Ví dụ: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people use public bike-sharing services to commute to work because they are cheap and convenient, especially in crowded cities.
× Yes I did, I have a bike when I was a child to practice the balance.
✓ Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child to practice balance.
语法类型ID:6(现在时问题)与ID5(过去时问题)相关,但此句主要时态混用:学生先用过去式“Yes, I did”回答,接着不恰当地用现在时“I have a bike when I was a child”。应将描述过去的第二句改为过去时“had”。同时去掉不必要的冠词“the”,并将“practice the balance”简化为“practice balance”。建议:在叙述过去经历时,整个句子保持过去时一致;注意冠词使用,常见短语为“practice balance”。
× Yes, I think a bike is very popular in my country and the people usually uh borrow the bike public by to Tran trans to in order to transit uh. It is very convenient and uh.
✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country, and people usually borrow public bikes to commute. It is very convenient.
语法类型ID:1(单复数问题)和ID11(介词使用)及ID22(冠词错误)相关。原句中单复数不一致:先用“a bike is very popular”应改为复数“bikes are very popular”。“the people”可简化为“people”。“borrow the bike public by to Tran trans to in order to transit”是混乱的短语,应改为常用搭配“borrow public bikes to commute”。同时删除多余的填充词“uh”。建议:表达普遍现象用复数名词,如“bikes are popular”;常用短语“public bikes”“to commute”。